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And I feel the darkness seeping in
Lonely haunted trees, cold winter nights
The tears freeze on my face
My heart turns black with sorrow
The lies creep in my bones

(From the) Father of Lies

I remain in this desolate place
Black sighs get me through the days
I can see my breath,
But I am not alive
Creeping all throughout me
The lies begin to cripple

(From the) Father of Lies

I see no hope through the black
A downcast face the only thing
That greets each frost-filled day
I loathe the deadness that is me
I call out Your beautiful Name
Cut out the sorrow, the depression
I leave my burdens at Your feet
That were pierced for me
Dry my tears, take away my pain
For I cannot do it on my own

Father of Lies
I will destroy you

Father of Truth
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Father of Truth

Contributed by bobotheclown on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:38:40 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am all alone
And I feel the darkness seeping in
Lonely haunted trees, cold winter nights
The tears freeze on my face
My heart turns black with sorrow
The lies creep in my bones

(From the) Father of Lies

I remain in this desolate place
Black sighs get me through the days
I can see my breath,
But I am not alive
Creeping all throughout me
The lies begin to cripple

(From the) Father of Lies

I see no hope through the black
A downcast face the only thing
That greets each frost-filled day
I loathe the deadness that is me
I call out Your beautiful Name
Cut out the sorrow, the depression
I leave my burdens at Your feet
That were pierced for me
Dry my tears, take away my pain
For I cannot do it on my own

Father of Lies
I will destroy you

Father of Truth
I welcome you home

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2005-11-05 01:38:40]
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Re: Father of Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:59:40 PM AEST
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I can feel your pain in this... Nicely done... Hope you feel better soon..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Father of Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:06:45 PM AEST
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That is painful, sorry you are going through that. Good poem! Christina

Re: Father of Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 07:48:28 PM AEST
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I felt this way down deep Joel. I hope that things turn on the sunnyside for you soon.
Im only a pm or a yahoo away

hugs
Michelle

Re: Father of Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 10:00:17 PM AEST
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Wow, its tragic i havent read any of your recent poems. I feel like im missing out, im sorry. Anyway, im sorry about your break up, thats hard im sure, Im glad you have an outlet and your a very talented poet. Keep up the great work. And i'll keep an eye out for you online... hopefully we can talk soon.
Cheers!

Re: Father of Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 05:56:55 AM AEST
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Joel, this was so sad. It's making me cry *Sniff*

You have such a girft on making people feel the anger and hurt in your poems. This was outstanding, keep up the good work hun xxx

Jane~

Re: Father of Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 04:32:57 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, I can feel what you were going through, I hope you are doing better.

Take care.

Scott

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