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Array ( [sid] => 10911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2003-01-22 02:20:00 [hometext] => THIS POEM I WROTE FOR MY ONE AND ONLY BROTHER!!!! [bodytext] => THE ONLY MAN OTHER THEN MY FATHER I LOOK UP TO THE MOST IS 5 FOOT 11 AND LEAN. HE HAS A FUN FILLED FACE WITH ALOT OF LAUGHS.

HIS BRIGHT BLUE EYES GUIDE THE WAYS AS HIS MUSCULAR ARMS ENFOLD WITH LOTS OF WARMTH AND LOVE AS HE HOLDS SOMEONE CLOSE AND NEAR, WHILE HIS HARD WORKING HANDS AND FINGERS WIPE AWAY THE TEARS.

HE LIGHTS THE NIGHT WITH HIS EXISTENCE, HIS MUSIC INVADES YOUR SOUL AND AT THE SAME TIME MAKES YOU WHOLE.

HE'S QUICK WITH WIT, WON'T MISS A BIT. HE KNOWS THE SHOW AND JUST LETS IT FLOW.

HE KNOWS THE MAGNIFIENCE OF ALL NATURE AND IS VERY SPIRITED. HE IS INSIDE HIMSELF AND STRONG.

HE IS A DIAMOND WITH MANY FACETS. A SILVERY-BLUE STONE, RARE, BUT WITHOUT DEFECT, CUT WITH RADIANCE TO SEE FIRE AND LIGHT.

HE'S TALENTED AND HANDSOME. HE'S SMART WITH ALOT OF GREAT ADVICE. HE ALWAYS TRIES TO BE HELPFUL AND KIND BUT IS ALWAYS CARING.

THOSE ARE JUST A FEW THINGS ABOUT THE MAN I LOOK UP TO THE MOST AND THERE IS MANY, MANY MORE GREAT THINGS WHERE THOSE CAME FROM, BUT THE BEST THING ABOUT HIM IS......

HE'S MY BROTHER!!!!!
~I LOVE YOU TOMMY~ [comments] => 6 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 23 [informant] => BRAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
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Contributed by BRAT on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



THE ONLY MAN OTHER THEN MY FATHER I LOOK UP TO THE MOST IS 5 FOOT 11 AND LEAN. HE HAS A FUN FILLED FACE WITH ALOT OF LAUGHS.

HIS BRIGHT BLUE EYES GUIDE THE WAYS AS HIS MUSCULAR ARMS ENFOLD WITH LOTS OF WARMTH AND LOVE AS HE HOLDS SOMEONE CLOSE AND NEAR, WHILE HIS HARD WORKING HANDS AND FINGERS WIPE AWAY THE TEARS.

HE LIGHTS THE NIGHT WITH HIS EXISTENCE, HIS MUSIC INVADES YOUR SOUL AND AT THE SAME TIME MAKES YOU WHOLE.

HE'S QUICK WITH WIT, WON'T MISS A BIT. HE KNOWS THE SHOW AND JUST LETS IT FLOW.

HE KNOWS THE MAGNIFIENCE OF ALL NATURE AND IS VERY SPIRITED. HE IS INSIDE HIMSELF AND STRONG.

HE IS A DIAMOND WITH MANY FACETS. A SILVERY-BLUE STONE, RARE, BUT WITHOUT DEFECT, CUT WITH RADIANCE TO SEE FIRE AND LIGHT.

HE'S TALENTED AND HANDSOME. HE'S SMART WITH ALOT OF GREAT ADVICE. HE ALWAYS TRIES TO BE HELPFUL AND KIND BUT IS ALWAYS CARING.

THOSE ARE JUST A FEW THINGS ABOUT THE MAN I LOOK UP TO THE MOST AND THERE IS MANY, MANY MORE GREAT THINGS WHERE THOSE CAME FROM, BUT THE BEST THING ABOUT HIM IS......

HE'S MY BROTHER!!!!!
~I LOVE YOU TOMMY~




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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:59:03 AM AEST
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Awww Brat i hope your brother see's this one...this is soooo sweet of you to write such a beautiful piece about him...welcome to YPDC i look forward to reading more of your poetry.....i enjoyed this one ...thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


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by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 03:38:33 AM AEST
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I feel the same way about my brother - this said everything I could ever say. Thanks for sharing a great poem.


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by Dani on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:11:26 AM AEST
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Aww, this is sweet... you should show it to him if you haven't already.... I have three older brothers that were always my strength growing up, so I can relate to this... beautiful!


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by BRAT on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:28:32 PM AEST
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thank you for your comment it was touching!!


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by BRAT on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:31:08 PM AEST
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Your Welcome...I love sharing my poems.....i should have more coming soon!!!


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by BRAT on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:32:27 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comment......i did show it to my brother and he didnt realize how much i looked up to him...he was touched.




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