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Time doesnt matter anymore
Just lying inside of myself
Watching my life being destroyed before my eyes
Not caring anymore
Feeling so emotionless
Stuck in a dark world
And no light to lead me back to reality
The acid rain destroying by already broken soul
But soon the pain will cease
And never come back
For I have fallen
And to weak to get back up
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The Acid Rain Is Falling

Contributed by sewntogether on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My field of flowers are decaying
Time doesnt matter anymore
Just lying inside of myself
Watching my life being destroyed before my eyes
Not caring anymore
Feeling so emotionless
Stuck in a dark world
And no light to lead me back to reality
The acid rain destroying by already broken soul
But soon the pain will cease
And never come back
For I have fallen
And to weak to get back up

Copyright © sewntogether ... [ 2005-11-04 23:25:50]
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Re: The Acid Rain Is Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:14:54 AM AEST
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hey,
good
f'ing good write
god scary
good
i no how it feels but i cant say ive ever been to weak to get up
yet
till next time
emz

Re: The Acid Rain Is Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:43:27 AM AEST
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I thought the last line was a bit weak, but
other than that I thought it was a strong write
and quite well written. I can relate to these
feelings all to well and just so you know the
sun will one day poke through the clouds and
a rainbow will appear... sounds corny, but its
the truth. Keep up the writing you have talent.

BObo (Joel)

Re: The Acid Rain Is Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:05:04 PM AEST
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I hope this is only a poem, this is soooo sad:>

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