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Array ( [sid] => 109085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddys 'lil Lady [time] => 2005-11-04 16:31:25 [hometext] => very sad [bodytext] => To me you are stranger
Though I've known you all my life
You whole aura gives off a sense of danger
So I know something just isnt right
Its like your changing for the worst right before my eyes
And all I can do is watch
As you slowly die
And your level of sanity drops
Why did they have to put you here Dad
Why did it have to be you
All of the great times we had
And now suddenly thats all through
This institution is makin ME crazy
Just wanting you to be out
I remember when you used to call me "Your lil lady"
But now all you do is shout
They call your condition uncurable
And that this is how its going to be
But my love is so durable
So daddy why dont you love me
Momma said its not my fault
That theres nothing I can do
The disease will never come to a halt
But I wont believe that to be true
So here are some pictures of us
I'll put them on your stand
And I dont mean to cry its just...
That I remember when you used to be my number one fan
But now you look at me like you do not know me at all
And when I tell you my name
You curse at me and say you do not recall
So guess this is how it is
And thier is no looking back
I am no memory of his
It's a proven fact
Daddys 'lil lady
With eyes so blue
Dancing on your toes
Oh God I pray that someday maybe
I'll look at him and say I love you
And atleast he'll say I know


















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Daddys 'lil Lady

Contributed by skillzwayaboveyours on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 04:31:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



To me you are stranger
Though I've known you all my life
You whole aura gives off a sense of danger
So I know something just isnt right
Its like your changing for the worst right before my eyes
And all I can do is watch
As you slowly die
And your level of sanity drops
Why did they have to put you here Dad
Why did it have to be you
All of the great times we had
And now suddenly thats all through
This institution is makin ME crazy
Just wanting you to be out
I remember when you used to call me "Your lil lady"
But now all you do is shout
They call your condition uncurable
And that this is how its going to be
But my love is so durable
So daddy why dont you love me
Momma said its not my fault
That theres nothing I can do
The disease will never come to a halt
But I wont believe that to be true
So here are some pictures of us
I'll put them on your stand
And I dont mean to cry its just...
That I remember when you used to be my number one fan
But now you look at me like you do not know me at all
And when I tell you my name
You curse at me and say you do not recall
So guess this is how it is
And thier is no looking back
I am no memory of his
It's a proven fact
Daddys 'lil lady
With eyes so blue
Dancing on your toes
Oh God I pray that someday maybe
I'll look at him and say I love you
And atleast he'll say I know






















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Re: Daddys 'lil Lady (User Rating: 1 )
by Evening_Star on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 04:40:24 PM AEST
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Such a sad and heartwrenching poem. You express your emotion well.
liz


Re: Daddys 'lil Lady (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 04:56:23 PM AEST
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i feel so sorry for you my heart goes to you. i hope one day your father withh be able to say he knows you love him. good luck
keep up the good writing
luv
jenni
xxxxxxxx


Re: Daddys 'lil Lady (User Rating: 1 )
by onedysturbdchick on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:20:32 AM AEST
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amazing.....i can't really say much more....you've got me speechless with this one.....awesome work




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