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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Unstoppable
[time] => 2005-11-04 14:29:25
[hometext] => lol It feels a little strange to put one of my writes under the happy category, but no other topic really fit.
[bodytext] => Soaring high above the crowd
shedding of this darkish shroud
Surveying the oddities of a tainted past
I wonder at which point the die was cast
Reflective glimpses in the mirror, tell a haunted tale
these eyes reveal a teflon shield; an emotive veil
Remote are the details the keeper beholds
close the book on a story untold
Master manipulator of a past removed
this beckoning of light is questionable, unproved
One last ghostly glance to the forbidden yesteryear
objects in mirror are purging what the scars adhere
The shadow obediently follows closely behind
another soul marches on, though feeble and blind
Try to pin me down, and dig me a grave
this malnourished hunger I can no longer stave
Here I am. A crowning victory of achievement
rebuking any pitiful thoughts of bereavement
Spirit soaring high above the crowd
no more self-inflicted hurt allowed
[comments] => 17
[counter] => 535
[topic] => 54
[informant] => hauntedscorp
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[score] => 65
[ratings] => 13
[editpoem] => 1
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Unstoppable
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Soaring high above the crowd
shedding of this darkish shroud
Surveying the oddities of a tainted past
I wonder at which point the die was cast
Reflective glimpses in the mirror, tell a haunted tale
these eyes reveal a teflon shield; an emotive veil
Remote are the details the keeper beholds
close the book on a story untold
Master manipulator of a past removed
this beckoning of light is questionable, unproved
One last ghostly glance to the forbidden yesteryear
objects in mirror are purging what the scars adhere
The shadow obediently follows closely behind
another soul marches on, though feeble and blind
Try to pin me down, and dig me a grave
this malnourished hunger I can no longer stave
Here I am. A crowning victory of achievement
rebuking any pitiful thoughts of bereavement
Spirit soaring high above the crowd
no more self-inflicted hurt allowed
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-11-04 14:29:25]
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Re: Unstoppable
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by mindset on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 03:03:42 PM AEST
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U know
thats what im talkin about
We all have power yet so much to pay for it
Our lives may be an obscurity yet we move on
Are we puppets with no string
Or is fate all we supposed to be
A journey awaits my friend
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Re: Unstoppable
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by brew on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:09:28 AM AEST
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You have what it takes to go..........so fly free......it cant be unstopable! Many dwell what hasn't nor won't.You keep going.Yes, my karma , one!
Use all..........Smile and know it.
Brew~ |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:54:36 AM AEST
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Blessed are these words and YOU..Scorp- : )
It was a bit surreal to read this emotion from you-
I'm happy beyond the telling!
I hope it lasts forever-
magnificent..this ode to happiness-
Sincerely-
B |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 02:02:18 AM AEST
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A tribute 2 your self and rightly so well deserved, beautifuly written and very
approriate, lovely as always scorp, second 2 none . . .
(((((((((scorp))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:02:59 PM AEST
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WOW! Scorpy...this is so unique! I love your spirit girl!
No matter what the mood or emotion, you capture it
plainly and most certainly, ringing it out for all of us to share ...
Stunning write this was. Wonderful word choices!
And beautiful to see you in such a mood!
~Breezy |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 03:41:11 PM AEST
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That's my girl. You've got a free spirit nobody can ever take the spark from. You're an amazing gifted young lady who has the extraordinary power to lift herself up from any situation and move on. It's great to read a much happier write from you dearest Scorp. May your days always be bright and blessed.
Your words grace the walls of ones inner soul. Always a pleasure to read such remarkable work by such a very talented and clever Miss.
Much love n hugs to such a dear friend,
*sue* |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 04:39:48 PM AEST
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For some reason, I find it hard to believe anyone or thing could hold you back let alone would they try lol. I've noticed you're not one to exactly stand down, and aren't afraid to speak your mind. But then again, we all hide behind masks sometimes, that let us appear to be stronger then which we are. I don't know if that's the case for you though, you seem really strong in a lot of aspects. Very emotionfelt, I have to say I've loved all your poems that I have read. Great write, looking forward to more.
-Cassy |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:41:11 AM AEST
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A happy poem from Scorpy??? Now that’s something un-expected. LOL.
I like the way it all blended together perfectly. It just had that exact spice to it to make it into your own.
Good one.
Jane~ |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by wizard on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:10:22 PM AEST
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hey scorp, great write. happy and dark...nice combo! always a pleasure to read work writes.
this was no exception.
wizard |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:00:18 PM AEST
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| Scorp this was awesome, really different then the rest..stands out big time…its filled with positive..and at times angry…hopeful words. Nice job expressing your feelings and your desires. Glad to read you feeling alright. |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by MrJeans on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 01:31:57 AM AEST
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So very inspiring Scorp!!! What a great job.
Insightful, positive, fierce, and strong. . . like you, I suspect :D
Keep those poems coming!!
Mr. |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Alibi on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 09:53:26 AM AEST
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| Scorp this was so wonderful for me to read! I am so happy for you. Not just the feeling, the poem itself was really good. You used some creative wording, and it had a great flow to it, and it really was story-like. Very well done my dear! |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:09:36 AM AEST
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So happy for you scorp. this was an excellent write go girl
love Angelxx |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:34:27 PM AEST
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As always, incredible, Scorpenator! ! !
I like that "Soaring high above the crowd" Gave me a feeling of flying. :-)
Thanks,
TIMraider
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Re: Unstoppable
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by LostAmbition on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST
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woah. i dig this big time
alot going on in this poem
i like the 2nd & 3rd stanzas
best, but the whole thing
is solid
great write! |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:05:20 PM AEST
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A wonderful flight through the nuances of your mind, with a positive ending to find. A beautiful example of determining where you are by where you've been. And hence, where you might want to go from here.
Well done, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Unstoppable
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 06:54:41 PM AEST
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I can/'/t seem to write happy.
But you are a masterful little minx and a saucy one too.
This was great. Your home should be here.
Ignore the nonsense. Write and write......... |
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