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Array ( [sid] => 109050 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Payback [time] => 2005-11-04 02:31:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A basket, a vase of colors
I turn your love over
I close my eyes; no need to say why
Yet still, let me catch my breath
You know this is November

Now where shall you go?
I knew you had someone new
This is no payback
Hand me not your flowers
Left, no hours, we are through

Perhaps tomorrow, you will gather new colors
For the one at the end of your pot of gold
Useless dreams, you have are nothing
Strange world we live in
When I am not the one, you will hold

You have let me know, how it was unreal
The time has finally come around
I felt your problem, before
Paybacks, no, tough, yes
Two lives wasted, leaves a sighing sound

Meagan writes;>
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No Payback

Contributed by DreamPoetess on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A basket, a vase of colors
I turn your love over
I close my eyes; no need to say why
Yet still, let me catch my breath
You know this is November

Now where shall you go?
I knew you had someone new
This is no payback
Hand me not your flowers
Left, no hours, we are through

Perhaps tomorrow, you will gather new colors
For the one at the end of your pot of gold
Useless dreams, you have are nothing
Strange world we live in
When I am not the one, you will hold

You have let me know, how it was unreal
The time has finally come around
I felt your problem, before
Paybacks, no, tough, yes
Two lives wasted, leaves a sighing sound

Meagan writes;>

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Re: No Payback (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:42:10 AM AEST
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Nice write.

Re: No Payback (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 03:35:33 AM AEST
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Oh Meagan it's great to be back and reading your remarkable work again. This is a sad and heart breaking write. I hope that all is well with you my dear friend. I feel there is alot more to your poem. So much sadness reflected from your words.
*heartfelt hugs for you*
sue

Re: No Payback (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:15:01 PM AEST
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Echoing Sue.- Very sad peom. There is much unsaid.
May you find consolation dear Meagan!
Peace and love
lizabeth

Re: No Payback (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 10:27:46 PM AEST
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A sad poem so very well written

Jeff

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