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Array ( [sid] => 109040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mysterious Thoughts [time] => 2005-11-03 23:16:25 [hometext] => Another poem of random craziness born out of insomnia. I guess I'll add this one to my Insomnia Diary..... [bodytext] =>

When it comes to
fireflies and vampires
nothing is as it seems.

Could it be
chaos or cosmos?
Which one fills your dreams?

The beautiful
children and flowers
require more than seed.

It seems
Anath and government
ride the same steed.

Neither
doctors or saints
can stop this growing disease.

Both
Cortez and Quezacotl
demand a steep fee.

In the end
seppuku or execution
with both you must bleed.

Only in understanding
butterflies and dragons
can you truly be free...

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Mysterious Thoughts

Contributed by poisonpen00ad on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

When it comes to
fireflies and vampires
nothing is as it seems.

Could it be
chaos or cosmos?
Which one fills your dreams?

The beautiful
children and flowers
require more than seed.

It seems
Anath and government
ride the same steed.

Neither
doctors or saints
can stop this growing disease.

Both
Cortez and Quezacotl
demand a steep fee.

In the end
seppuku or execution
with both you must bleed.

Only in understanding
butterflies and dragons
can you truly be free...

Copyright © poisonpen00ad ... [ 2005-11-03 23:16:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Mysterious Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:50:54 PM AEST
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ha ha! I like it!

Re: Mysterious Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:52:24 AM AEST
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Wow I really like your poem. Sue *sighs* ah yes insomnia I can so much relate. An absolutely sensational write. 5 stars for you.
*hugs*
sue

Re: Mysterious Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:11:36 PM AEST
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wonderful write .. seppuku or execution ... interesting thoughts...

Re: Mysterious Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Desolated_Denial on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:14:19 PM AEST
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It's amazing. I like the comparisions.

"Only in understanding
butterflies and dragons
can you truly be free..."

I love that line ...
It can apply to anything; universal

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