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Array ( [sid] => 109035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Motionless [time] => 2005-11-03 22:15:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Something died inside me the day you left,
a deep dark hole remains,bottomless pit.

Tho' I had time to prepare for our separation,
my heart fell under lock 'n' key.

Words can never express what you meant to me,
a huge space you keep in my heart.

Once flowed happiness,
now all is dark and still.

Where you are now,
I may never get to be.

Your New journey began,
the day you left me.

If tears were money,
I would b rich.

I'd buy back time,
until we were together again.

One last goodbye is what I need from you,
my gramma, my friend. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 52 [informant] => memories_mist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Motionless

Contributed by memories_mist on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Something died inside me the day you left,
a deep dark hole remains,bottomless pit.

Tho' I had time to prepare for our separation,
my heart fell under lock 'n' key.

Words can never express what you meant to me,
a huge space you keep in my heart.

Once flowed happiness,
now all is dark and still.

Where you are now,
I may never get to be.

Your New journey began,
the day you left me.

If tears were money,
I would b rich.

I'd buy back time,
until we were together again.

One last goodbye is what I need from you,
my gramma, my friend.

Copyright © memories_mist ... [ 2005-11-03 22:15:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Motionless (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:42:25 PM AEST
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so beautiful. So so beautiful! Goodbye is such a terribly sweet word...

Re: Motionless (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:07:31 AM AEST
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...I was surprised with the ending...expected the loss of a lover...losing figures of stature, significance, security, warmth and love...even if it isn't a romantic loss, it is a significant loss...

...funny, though...I was relieved when I found it wasn't the loss of a spouse, significant other, romantic interest...not sure what that means...

...I hope the memory of her will help to heal your sorrow and loss...

enigma

Re: Motionless (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 05:40:53 AM AEST
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Wow such a beautiful poem...didnt think it would end like it did. So sorry for your loss
Luv
Jenni
xxxx

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