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Array ( [sid] => 109033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I pray for your failure [time] => 2005-11-03 22:02:33 [hometext] => This is to my ex-wife and her friends/family for what they put me through... [bodytext] => -------------___________--------------------------

I trusted you..
Wake up.... I've been... watching you...

You've sunk lower than I've ever seen,
and even though you deserved this
I tried to catch your fall
I've grown so tired of your childish threats
Know that I'll never run from anything

And I'll burn the building
If I knew you'd die
And I'll pray you're a failure
And that you won't make it out alive

Here's where I prove all your fairytales and lies wrong
This all stops tonight
Swim in your sea of smoke until your lungs lose the fight
It's over
This all stops tonight
Never could prove me wrong

What have you become trough your jealousy?
You've threatened my life, my friends and family
This is your last wrong turn in your life
and this dead end leads to a blood bath
your blood bath

You'll never stop me with your one-man army
I would burn him alive
You'll never stop me with your one-man army
If you're so right then bring the fight
I'm paging your name
We're all one and the same
I'm moving on, and living our dreams!

And I'll burn the building
If I knew you'd die
And I'll pray you're a failure
And that you won't make it out alive!
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I pray for your failure

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:02:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



-------------___________--------------------------

I trusted you..
Wake up.... I've been... watching you...

You've sunk lower than I've ever seen,
and even though you deserved this
I tried to catch your fall
I've grown so tired of your childish threats
Know that I'll never run from anything

And I'll burn the building
If I knew you'd die
And I'll pray you're a failure
And that you won't make it out alive

Here's where I prove all your fairytales and lies wrong
This all stops tonight
Swim in your sea of smoke until your lungs lose the fight
It's over
This all stops tonight
Never could prove me wrong

What have you become trough your jealousy?
You've threatened my life, my friends and family
This is your last wrong turn in your life
and this dead end leads to a blood bath
your blood bath

You'll never stop me with your one-man army
I would burn him alive
You'll never stop me with your one-man army
If you're so right then bring the fight
I'm paging your name
We're all one and the same
I'm moving on, and living our dreams!

And I'll burn the building
If I knew you'd die
And I'll pray you're a failure
And that you won't make it out alive!




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Re: I pray for your failure (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:14:08 PM AEST
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Just WOW.............
Words that use so much, and mean as much as well!
Sorry for the hurt.......
Seems, she will get what is deserves.
Power in the words that were penned
More sorry for the one who caused the hurt, and pain
No one should make another........HURT!


Brew~


Re: I pray for your failure (User Rating: 1 )
by memories_mist on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:24:19 PM AEST
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Intriguing.....very very....wow! Nicely done!


Re: I pray for your failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:24:19 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry you are going through so much pain and suffering. This is a well detailed write expressed so well. Just remember she'll have her day. For what goes around comes around. Nobody should have to take any abuse from anybody be it verbal or physical. May your journey in life ahead be a more pleasant experience than the last one you had. Goodluck and may sorrow never find a way into your heart.
*hugs*
sue


Re: I pray for your failure (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:42:56 AM AEST
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...I've been in a similar situation for thirteen and a half months...there are days when it is almost impossible to live above the fray...

...there were times when I definitely doubted the truth of what I have learned...but, the worst thing I can imagine is me compromising my adulthood because of, her, or anybody else for that matter...

...as ***** off at her parents as I am some times, her, too, I have come to the point where I respect and Love my "Self" enough to want to understand them...I mean...I know I am worthy of their regard...so, what's wrong with them?

...said enough...I posted a poem titled 'This Fiercely Gentle Warrior' that documents a time when I lost it, but got it back again...

...if you have examined yourself and have busted your butt in the attempt at being an emotional adult and not just a chronological adult...then you're better off not being saddled with it...

...try to understand the psychology of behavior...you might want to explore 'attachment theory' and 'child development' on the net...

...blessings on ya...

enigma




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