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Array ( [sid] => 109032 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love [time] => 2005-11-03 21:45:04 [hometext] => juss a random poem [bodytext] => Soft words whispered slowly
I love you
Capturing a heart
Endless thought of him
Sleepless nights wondering why
Why he fell in love with her
Thoughtlessly time slips
Then he questioned her
Asking how he would know
Know she loved him too
She couldnt resist tempting thoughts
The only thing she new
Her last piece of Innocense
His calls stopped coming
Excuses to why
Why he was never home
Then sudenly
A flash flood
No warning
Just destruction
A storming good bye
Quick thougts
Rummaged together of her
Shattered heart
Sharpended razorblades
for the Broken mind
She gave him her innocence
Now shell give him her life
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Love

Contributed by DamentedSuicide on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Soft words whispered slowly
I love you
Capturing a heart
Endless thought of him
Sleepless nights wondering why
Why he fell in love with her
Thoughtlessly time slips
Then he questioned her
Asking how he would know
Know she loved him too
She couldnt resist tempting thoughts
The only thing she new
Her last piece of Innocense
His calls stopped coming
Excuses to why
Why he was never home
Then sudenly
A flash flood
No warning
Just destruction
A storming good bye
Quick thougts
Rummaged together of her
Shattered heart
Sharpended razorblades
for the Broken mind
She gave him her innocence
Now shell give him her life

Copyright © DamentedSuicide ... [ 2005-11-03 21:45:04]
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Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:41:11 PM AEST
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Very powerful feelings in this. Feelings many who have lost their innocence in this manner can relate to.

*hugs*
Shannon

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by reecy on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 07:21:45 AM AEST
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Very powerfull.
The words you have used work well, my favourite, "Thoughtlessly time slips
Then he questioned her"
the words you have chosen are beautiful, yet they describe a situation that is not- giving it depth.
keep well

lau

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by HatchetGirl on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:15:19 PM AEST
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Beautifully written... it describes some people I know lifes perfectly!

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