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Array ( [sid] => 108994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A New Story [time] => 2005-11-03 11:28:18 [hometext] => this poem shows how close I was to the end. The last part of the poem is when I become a new person and “tell a new story”. The sun is to signify it warming up the coldness in my life that I used to have and becoming a happier, healthier person. [bodytext] => A New Story

It is so hard to step out
From the demons who have a hold
There is so much I doubt
As I sit by myself in the cold

Almost taken from this life
By my own demons
But really it is I with the knife
It is I who is screaming

But cracks from clouds reveal
The sun in all its glory
The feelings it brings are unreal
To this girl who’ll tell a new story
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A New Story

Contributed by scotsgirl on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:28:18 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A New Story

It is so hard to step out
From the demons who have a hold
There is so much I doubt
As I sit by myself in the cold

Almost taken from this life
By my own demons
But really it is I with the knife
It is I who is screaming

But cracks from clouds reveal
The sun in all its glory
The feelings it brings are unreal
To this girl who’ll tell a new story

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Re: A New Story (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:34:31 AM AEST
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hey bubsy, its great to see that people can actually get out of their depressive states, encourage people who don't feel there is hope. because you and i are living, LIVING proof.
great write
my fav. part was
It is so hard to step out
"From the demons who have a hold
There is so much I doubt
As I sit by myself in the cold "
keep writing
keep posting
your friend
katie kakes

Re: A New Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:52:12 PM AEST
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i have writtin similer stuff for the same reson, its good to see other people do it too.

Lessa

Re: A New Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Adrianna on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:34:36 PM AEST
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I love the feeling and emotion of your poem. It is very good.

Re: A New Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:45:36 PM AEST
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This is really awesome, I can relate to it a lot.
Thanks for sharing.

Scott

Re: A New Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:12:50 PM AEST
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May you go on feeling the warm rays of the sun each day of your life.
Thanks for sharing

Steve

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