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Array ( [sid] => 108964 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something [time] => 2005-11-02 21:30:53 [hometext] => *smiles* I was in a random optimistic mood today and felt the need to write this :D [bodytext] => Don't you just feel like sometimes you want to scream?
But you can't!
Something's holding you back...

Don't you just feel sometimes that you want to cry?
For no reason at all!
Something stops you though...

Don't you just want to laugh out loud sometimes?
And then you do!
Something tells you to...

A pointless fight that went too far
Saying it all wrong
Something to make you scream, but you don't...

A tear running down your cheek
Hearing "what's wrong?"
Something to make you cry, but you won't...

A smile from across the hall
With an inside joke attached
Something to make you laugh, and you do...

Something make syou hide the pain
Something makes you celebrate joy
Something deep inside...

Love is something [comments] => 8 [counter] => 300 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 28 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Something

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 09:30:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Don't you just feel like sometimes you want to scream?
But you can't!
Something's holding you back...

Don't you just feel sometimes that you want to cry?
For no reason at all!
Something stops you though...

Don't you just want to laugh out loud sometimes?
And then you do!
Something tells you to...

A pointless fight that went too far
Saying it all wrong
Something to make you scream, but you don't...

A tear running down your cheek
Hearing "what's wrong?"
Something to make you cry, but you won't...

A smile from across the hall
With an inside joke attached
Something to make you laugh, and you do...

Something make syou hide the pain
Something makes you celebrate joy
Something deep inside...

Love is something




Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-11-02 21:30:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:00:08 PM AEST
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That is awesome!


Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:23:32 PM AEST
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This was wonderful, it sparkles like champagne ..
mary


Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:39:04 PM AEST
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ewwwww, it's all lovie dovie!

:D

It was cool.


Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 12:25:52 AM AEST
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Kiela it's great to back and reading your remarkable work again. Love is a strange thing. It can make you feel all sorts of emotions. Another splendid write to add to your other fabulous work. You rock girl! Well done.
Much love,
*sue*


Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:42:16 AM AEST
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You're right, love is something, a wonderful but sometimes painful something at that. This was a great poem, keep up the good work :)

Curtis


Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:41:54 PM AEST
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Something (make syou) hide the pain....space in the wrong spot?
Otherwise I love the way this describes that certain feeling, not just love....but feeling love.


Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:10:42 AM AEST
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i enjoyed this kie been awhile since i read your poems but you still got it, a lovely work.

((((((((Kie)))))))))

Ben


Re: Something (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 07:45:35 PM AEST
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Sometimes you just want or need to write a poem and you do. It turns out to be unique and good and you smile and then yell "yippee" out loud to celebrate.

Well this poem is cause to celebrate, Kie

Will




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