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Array ( [sid] => 108956 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It happened on the 2nd [time] => 2005-11-02 19:29:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Agony washes over my body like frigid tides
my eyes are glazed over with the pain
my thoughts so deadly and forsaken
a heart beats heavier on this night

my soul is vised in sin as I think of what could have been
the contributions of my being I could have offered
selfish acts shall be punished and I shall accept this fate
I the silent brooder must sit in the dark

no shadows at my side only faint thoughts of what was
I shout at myself with the fury of tempests past
my fists clenched tightly upon the table as my eyes close tight
cussing to myself under my breath this pain so real

the stench of this depression is fresh in the air
I open my eyes to a blurry stream of icy tears
I am devoid of happiness I am unworthy of sympathy
there is no warmth in this form tonight

alone with my thoughts this hopelessness looms
my mind captivated to find the answers
no prayer can ease this weary mind
some occurrences are to unbearable to set free [comments] => 1 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Vampire_Slander [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
It happened on the 2nd

Contributed by Vampire_Slander on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 07:29:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Agony washes over my body like frigid tides
my eyes are glazed over with the pain
my thoughts so deadly and forsaken
a heart beats heavier on this night

my soul is vised in sin as I think of what could have been
the contributions of my being I could have offered
selfish acts shall be punished and I shall accept this fate
I the silent brooder must sit in the dark

no shadows at my side only faint thoughts of what was
I shout at myself with the fury of tempests past
my fists clenched tightly upon the table as my eyes close tight
cussing to myself under my breath this pain so real

the stench of this depression is fresh in the air
I open my eyes to a blurry stream of icy tears
I am devoid of happiness I am unworthy of sympathy
there is no warmth in this form tonight

alone with my thoughts this hopelessness looms
my mind captivated to find the answers
no prayer can ease this weary mind
some occurrences are to unbearable to set free




Copyright © Vampire_Slander ... [ 2005-11-02 19:29:38]
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Re: It happened on the 2nd (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:06:19 AM AEST
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the title didn't seem to fit such a deep write, however the poem was great full of emotion..




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