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Array ( [sid] => 108930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Against my will [time] => 2005-11-02 13:37:58 [hometext] => About being in love after fighting so hard against it. [bodytext] => Why do you insist on doing this to me
Surrounding me with your ambiguity
I drown myself and try to swim
My lace's undone and the light is now dim
If I could tell you what I now feel
You'd take my soul and twist it wrong
I fight the power you have over me
My everything's yours against my will

Striving to leave, I walk away fast
You pull me behind and begin to unwind
My insides are gone-it hurts me too well
This is a thirst I'm too scared to quench

The one me wants to take it all in
the other fights and cries in it's struggle
You know me enough to know I won’t talk
But I scream in my head as I jump from my chance
I'm becoming undone- I'm losing this dance
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LauraLiz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Against my will

Contributed by LauraLiz on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:37:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Why do you insist on doing this to me
Surrounding me with your ambiguity
I drown myself and try to swim
My lace's undone and the light is now dim
If I could tell you what I now feel
You'd take my soul and twist it wrong
I fight the power you have over me
My everything's yours against my will

Striving to leave, I walk away fast
You pull me behind and begin to unwind
My insides are gone-it hurts me too well
This is a thirst I'm too scared to quench

The one me wants to take it all in
the other fights and cries in it's struggle
You know me enough to know I won’t talk
But I scream in my head as I jump from my chance
I'm becoming undone- I'm losing this dance




Copyright © LauraLiz ... [ 2005-11-02 13:37:58]
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Re: Against my will (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:58:40 PM AEST
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Well written and slightly perturbing.




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