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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => my demons or demons within
[time] => 2005-11-02 06:25:13
[hometext] => comments needed
[bodytext] => telling me yes ,it dosnt hurt
you like how it feels
with this sharp knife
see the red on the end
dont eat that you fat pig
go and get ride of it look in the mirror
know the skeloton in the reflection
but have the image
of being to big
saying yah im kool
im fine stay to yourself
lie lie try to hide
the thing tat are
going on inside your mind
inside your mind are
the nonperfections that we
all live with
dont do it
yes no yes no
what do i do
raging fire in side my mind
gos on every day
trying not to scream
and yell
but soon my wall will
bust.
everything will come out
having the image of insanity.
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 225
[topic] => 13
[informant] => crazy
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DarkPoetry
)
my demons or demons within
Contributed by
crazy
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 06:25:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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telling me yes ,it dosnt hurt
you like how it feels
with this sharp knife
see the red on the end
dont eat that you fat pig
go and get ride of it look in the mirror
know the skeloton in the reflection
but have the image
of being to big
saying yah im kool
im fine stay to yourself
lie lie try to hide
the thing tat are
going on inside your mind
inside your mind are
the nonperfections that we
all live with
dont do it
yes no yes no
what do i do
raging fire in side my mind
gos on every day
trying not to scream
and yell
but soon my wall will
bust.
everything will come out
having the image of insanity.
Copyright ©
crazy
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2005-11-02 06:25:13]
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 08:04:19 AM AEST
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Keeping everything in until eventually you can't take it will only make things harder for you. It may not happen soon, but the longer it takes, the more it's going to hurt in the future when you snap. It may seem like the best solution - the safest solution, but it's not, and in the midst of doing what you think may be right, your hurting yourself and others. Great write, a few spelling errors, but none the less, it gets the message out.
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by mjh0813 on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 09:06:15 AM AEST
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LET IT ALL OUT!! it will help you. you'll feel better
dont hold ne thing back just say how you feel and it may help it'll be harder if you wait till you cant take it ne more..oh nice job!
peace and love
meghann |
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:11:53 AM AEST
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nice very nice.
I agree with what everyone else saids.
You gotta let it out before its too late.
good write |
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:10:08 PM AEST
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| good job. You gotta let stuff out though or it just makes it worst. Plus why should you hide what you feel when all that is, is a lie to you and the people around you. |
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 04:08:21 PM AEST
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...definitely...I've met similar imps...nasty little things...I've struggled with them for half a century...I finally found out where they were coming from...yeah...really...
...it's a long story, but basically it all revolves around "attachment theory"...as infants...the first three years and more heavily the first year and a half...each of us establishes from the experiences we have with our caregivers a perspective of our world and our "Self." As little toddlers we adopted the world we lived in...angry, threatening mom...yelling, swearing dad...cry ourselves to sleep...hungry and wet...mom yelling and chasing my older sister around the house...these experiences are incredibly scary to a toddler...he doesn't trust people...he figures anything could happen any time...he's afraid of new experiences...afraid of people...afraid to stand up for himself...afraid to live...and as a child, all of these fears were very real...he had legitimate reasons to be afraid...
...as he grew up, so did his fears...it's like my old dashound and german shepherd...the dashound was full grown...about eight inches tall...the german shepherd was a newborn puppy...the dashound barked and nipped and had that little puppy obeying his every whim...a year later, the german shepherd is full grown...about two feet tall and close to eighty pounds...the little eight inch dashound still has that german shepherd obeying his every whim...go figure!
...I was living the life of an adult through the eyes and expectations of a toddler...I was scared of things there was no need for an adult to fear...the little kid inside would scream, "You can't do that! They'll hammer you!" The little demons had me obeying their every whim...
...brain chemistry impacted my experience, but my behaviors were pretty much a slave to the "attachment experiences" of my infantcy...I was controlled by those "attachment experiences."
Jim Carey's film, The Truman Show, is a great metaphor illustrating how we are essentially controlled by the experiences our parents provided us with during our first three years of life, our "attachment years..." He finally came to the point where he had to make the decision whether or not to step through his "door" and rid himself of all the things that sought to control him, or to remain a slave to those devilish demons and imps. I walked through my own personal "Truman's Door" about six to eight months ago...it's nice.
...good movie...you might want to look up "attachment theory" on the net to get a better picture of the dynamics...
...bless you...
...I hope you find your "Truman's Door" soon...
ron...enigma |
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by romance_pyro on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:00:38 PM AEST
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| It sounds like the inspiater of the poem was having some problems. But there was never anyone there to help them get over them. And I just wish that it could have been me. Take care crazy... |
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 11:09:32 PM AEST
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All of the above commenters are right my friend. Let it out.
Be not ashamed to show hurt or anger.
You may want to refer to my poem entitled
Chastised by the Love of Friendship.
It is far safer to let it out rather than become a cynic which happenjs if anger or frustration is swallowed and stuffed.
Great write and great courage
Elizabeth |
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Re: my demons or demons within
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by Craze on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 07:44:04 AM AEST
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| This poetry really shed some light on some issues but it was cool i liked |
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