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The last eight months of your life here on earth was hell for you.
Now god has taken you home with him.
We have gotten closer then we ever was.
But seeing you in so much agony it was like you were a prisioner in your own body.
Oh how you wanted to get up and go where just any where would have been great for you.
Mom i love you with all my heart and soul.
You gave me life only a mother could give.
There were good times and lord knows there were bad times too.
But we all loved each other and it got us through the tough struggles that life has placed upon us.
we have all mended our differences and tried to give the care you so needed the last few months of your life.
I am going to miss calling you.
Even when we disagreed you were always there.
Mom i will go on and i will meet you there someday when it is my time.
But until then i will be thinking of you each and every day. of my life.
OH GOD I AM GOING TO MISS YOU SO1
LOVE YOU ALWAYS
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GOODBYE MOM

Contributed by car21221 on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:26:52 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

As i sit here writing my goodbye to you the tears are building in my eyes.
The last eight months of your life here on earth was hell for you.
Now god has taken you home with him.
We have gotten closer then we ever was.
But seeing you in so much agony it was like you were a prisioner in your own body.
Oh how you wanted to get up and go where just any where would have been great for you.
Mom i love you with all my heart and soul.
You gave me life only a mother could give.
There were good times and lord knows there were bad times too.
But we all loved each other and it got us through the tough struggles that life has placed upon us.
we have all mended our differences and tried to give the care you so needed the last few months of your life.
I am going to miss calling you.
Even when we disagreed you were always there.
Mom i will go on and i will meet you there someday when it is my time.
But until then i will be thinking of you each and every day. of my life.
OH GOD I AM GOING TO MISS YOU SO1
LOVE YOU ALWAYS
YOUR DAUGHTER

Copyright © car21221 ... [ 2005-11-01 21:26:52]
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Re: GOODBYE MOM (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:15:22 PM AEST
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Condolences on the loss of your mother. My heart and prayers go out to you. Your mother will always be watching over you.
*heartfelt hugs 4 you*
Sue

Re: GOODBYE MOM (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:28:47 PM AEST
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I know how you feel I cried when I read this I lost my mom in Oct. 4 years ago but it still hurts today, I really feel this pain you have I read this over & over thinking it was me writing it to my mom, it so sad & not easy loosing a friend you had your whole life! Christina

Re: GOODBYE MOM (User Rating: 1 )
by Evening_Star on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:09:54 AM AEST
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I could not fathom what it would be like to lose my mom. About 4 years ago I watched my husband's mom go through a cancer ordeal with her mother (his grandmother) where things got really bad and we lost her to cancer. It really hurt that there wasn't anything I could do to make his mom feel better except hug her and to hold her. If only there was no pain just death. My condolences go out to you and your family.
liz

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