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Array ( [sid] => 108824 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life is What I never Expected [time] => 2005-10-31 18:32:54 [hometext] => Life is what you make of it as people say but in my case...well life isnt what i made it out to be... [bodytext] => Her eyes are burning,
The heart still hurting.
This isn’t the first time,
And wont be the last.
Nothing can stop the pain ,
Nothing will make Her whole again.
The pain gets deeper every day,
She wishes she could just leave it behind her.
Keep it in the past,
But she couldn’t,
The scars keep reminding her,
That nothing will every be good again.
But then he showed up,
And her life changed, but not enough.
There was still a missing piece …
The most important part ,Her soul.
She lost it and never will she find it again,
Never will she once be herself.
Never to be free from this burning pain deep within her soul,
It stays their like a burn from a coal.
So now hear she goes again,
Letting her emotions spill out with the touch of a knife pressing hard a sliding slowly down Her arm, closing her eyes and slightly smiling just to no tomorrow she may not b here,Tomorrow may bring her nothing but a happy ending.
A promise never to be sad again.
she takes a deep breath n lets her self go in self inflicted pain.. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MysticFireFairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Life is What I never Expected

Contributed by MysticFireFairy on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 06:32:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Her eyes are burning,
The heart still hurting.
This isn’t the first time,
And wont be the last.
Nothing can stop the pain ,
Nothing will make Her whole again.
The pain gets deeper every day,
She wishes she could just leave it behind her.
Keep it in the past,
But she couldn’t,
The scars keep reminding her,
That nothing will every be good again.
But then he showed up,
And her life changed, but not enough.
There was still a missing piece …
The most important part ,Her soul.
She lost it and never will she find it again,
Never will she once be herself.
Never to be free from this burning pain deep within her soul,
It stays their like a burn from a coal.
So now hear she goes again,
Letting her emotions spill out with the touch of a knife pressing hard a sliding slowly down Her arm, closing her eyes and slightly smiling just to no tomorrow she may not b here,Tomorrow may bring her nothing but a happy ending.
A promise never to be sad again.
she takes a deep breath n lets her self go in self inflicted pain..

Copyright Â© MysticFireFairy ... [ 2005-10-31 18:32:54]
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Re: Life is What I never Expected (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 06:57:47 PM AEST
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heart wrenching write. Excellant expression throughout

Michelle

Re: Life is What I never Expected (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:45:18 AM AEST
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hey,
that cut way down to my bones
nearly made me cry
very hard to do
be proud
till next time emz

Re: Life is What I never Expected (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 12:10:31 PM AEST
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U have a very majestic style and very deep in
your emotional exposure, beautiful writting i'm in awe of your mural like expression, a
coat of many colors if u will . . .

(((((Kayla)))))

Ben

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