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Array ( [sid] => 10880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Two Temples and A Shrine. [time] => 2003-01-21 17:40:00 [hometext] => Been a spiritually oriented person visiting places of religious significance has always had a calming effect on me. This poem is about the three places I visited for the very first time and what I felt about them. [bodytext] => Siddhivinayak Temple (Mumbai, India.)

I had come once to seek your blessings,
But had to return seeing the rush,
Once again I came and this time there was no rush.

You are famous as Shree Siddhivinayak,
It feels like the whole of Mumbai converges
On Tuesday’s to seek your blessings Shree Siddhivinayak.

With your blessings, your devotees have seated you in a temple with a golden dome.
Seeing your orange coloured idol full of flowers and gold ornaments without even asking I realized that you have heard my wishes.

Your greatness cannot be described in humane words,
Oh! Siddhivinayaka forgive me, but this humble poet cannot describe something, which is heart felt but cannot be put in words.


Babulnath Temple (Mumbai, India.)

To reach till your abode,
108 steps was the climb,
climb full of deities until I reached your abode.

The convergence of devotees near your idol is worth seeing,
even a flower, which touches your idol, is termed as a blessing.

People chant your name loud and clear,
The father of Lord Ganesha, Lord Shiva you are so close to your devotee’s that they have nothing to fear.

Visit to your shrine has made me feel very humble,
so very simple yet so aesthetic .
Greatness of your shrine lies in its humbleness,
blessed is what I feel after visiting your temple and seeing its humbleness.

Haji Ali (Mumbai, India.)

Your shrine is in the sea,
blessed is my life that I could come,
your purity and Sufism is here for everyone to see.

It’s said from your shrine no one goes empty handed,
everyone’s wishes are fulfilled,
the sea represents the infiniteness of the wishes you have fulfilled.

It’s destiny that I could make it and seek your divine blessing’s Baba Haji Ali,
What more can I ask for?
Just keep me happy Baba Haji Ali.
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Two Temples and A Shrine.

Contributed by bhav on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



Siddhivinayak Temple (Mumbai, India.)

I had come once to seek your blessings,
But had to return seeing the rush,
Once again I came and this time there was no rush.

You are famous as Shree Siddhivinayak,
It feels like the whole of Mumbai converges
On Tuesday’s to seek your blessings Shree Siddhivinayak.

With your blessings, your devotees have seated you in a temple with a golden dome.
Seeing your orange coloured idol full of flowers and gold ornaments without even asking I realized that you have heard my wishes.

Your greatness cannot be described in humane words,
Oh! Siddhivinayaka forgive me, but this humble poet cannot describe something, which is heart felt but cannot be put in words.


Babulnath Temple (Mumbai, India.)

To reach till your abode,
108 steps was the climb,
climb full of deities until I reached your abode.

The convergence of devotees near your idol is worth seeing,
even a flower, which touches your idol, is termed as a blessing.

People chant your name loud and clear,
The father of Lord Ganesha, Lord Shiva you are so close to your devotee’s that they have nothing to fear.

Visit to your shrine has made me feel very humble,
so very simple yet so aesthetic .
Greatness of your shrine lies in its humbleness,
blessed is what I feel after visiting your temple and seeing its humbleness.

Haji Ali (Mumbai, India.)

Your shrine is in the sea,
blessed is my life that I could come,
your purity and Sufism is here for everyone to see.

It’s said from your shrine no one goes empty handed,
everyone’s wishes are fulfilled,
the sea represents the infiniteness of the wishes you have fulfilled.

It’s destiny that I could make it and seek your divine blessing’s Baba Haji Ali,
What more can I ask for?
Just keep me happy Baba Haji Ali.




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Re: Two Temples and A Shrine. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessica_Saini on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 06:00:36 PM AEST
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I'm am christian, and there seem to be a lot of christian poems in the religious topic, but it was really nice to see one about Hinduism for a change:) I thought it was quite interesting to hear about the temples:)
Nice write!
~Jessica


Re: Two Temples and A Shrine. (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 06:34:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful....you give beautiful images here....i've never seen india at all.....only pictures in magazines...and not to many at that.....this is a beautiful write bhav....thanks for sharing it....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Two Temples and A Shrine. (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 06:56:24 PM AEST
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wOW THANKS FOR THAT RELIGIOUS VACATION! WHAT A TRIP! CHRISTINA


Re: Two Temples and A Shrine. (User Rating: 1 )
by bhav on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:20:47 AM AEST
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Thanks, Jessica saini. Glad to know that you liked my poem, which was a change from the poems, which you have read till date in the religious section. Temples are just like churches the feeling is so very divine and holy when you enter, the atmosphere in there just seems to grow on you.


Re: Two Temples and A Shrine. (User Rating: 1 )
by bhav on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:21:47 AM AEST
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Thanks, Oreo .if I have made you see beautiful images through my poem then I have succeeded to a large extent in conveying what I felt when I went to the places mentioned in the poem. India, the more you talk about my beautiful country the lesser it is .it was my pleasure to share the beautiful images of our temples and shrine with you.


Re: Two Temples and A Shrine. (User Rating: 1 )
by bhav on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:23:24 AM AEST
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Firstly thanks Christina for enjoying the religious vacation, which I presented in my words to you. I feel really very happy to know that you felt as if you were on a trip with me to these places, saw them for yourself and really liked them for what they are .the Wow at the starting of your comment say’s it all.


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