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I’m the spawn of satin,
Servant to my lord.
Cut by the blade,
Bleeding out the sorrows.

Suicide you have chosen,
There’s no turning back.
I await your arrival,
Suffer for your crimes.

Hiding in darkness,
Afraid of the light.
The dragon has awoken,
Hungry for the flesh.

Eaten from the inside,
Infested with maggots.
You pray for help,
When no one will reply.

The church of death,
Reaping souls of the living.
Acid rains from above,
Burning the darkness inside.

You have no choice,
But to come with me.
The war has began,
Now can you see.

By Fred Smith
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Death Has Awoken

Contributed by fredsmith on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 05:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Death Has Awoken

I’m the spawn of satin,
Servant to my lord.
Cut by the blade,
Bleeding out the sorrows.

Suicide you have chosen,
There’s no turning back.
I await your arrival,
Suffer for your crimes.

Hiding in darkness,
Afraid of the light.
The dragon has awoken,
Hungry for the flesh.

Eaten from the inside,
Infested with maggots.
You pray for help,
When no one will reply.

The church of death,
Reaping souls of the living.
Acid rains from above,
Burning the darkness inside.

You have no choice,
But to come with me.
The war has began,
Now can you see.

By Fred Smith




Copyright © fredsmith ... [ 2005-10-30 17:44:19]
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Re: Death Has Awoken (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 05:50:50 PM AEST
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Very well done! :D
I liked how it flowed, although there were a few stanzas where you just kinda took a break from rhyming. Ah, well. Good write!
Favorite line: The church of death / Reaping souls of the living.
:D


Re: Death Has Awoken (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:53:09 AM AEST
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a brilliant poem, shows alot of skill. well done




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