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Array ( [sid] => 108739 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my blood tainted blade [time] => 2005-10-30 01:02:11 [hometext] => this poem is about a guy i love so much and i wish we could be together i know he wishes the same thing bcuz we've been friends since we were about 5 or 6 and we liked each since we knew each other but we both have different bfs and gfs its notmy bestwrit [bodytext] => as I looked at the blade
I thought of you and her together
I cut deep and fast
it started to bleed
more then I thought it would
more then I thought I ever could
the blood fell onto my pants
my heart started beating faster and faster
I started to get really scared
and started crying
"I never meant for it to go this far!"
while holding it
I want you so bad
I cant even explain it
my blood tainted blade tells all
how much I want you..
and all my anguish...
as I look at you and her in a picture
I start to cry
I cant stand the fact that your not mine...
the only thing I can call mine is my blood tainted blade [comments] => 5 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
my blood tainted blade

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:02:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



as I looked at the blade
I thought of you and her together
I cut deep and fast
it started to bleed
more then I thought it would
more then I thought I ever could
the blood fell onto my pants
my heart started beating faster and faster
I started to get really scared
and started crying
"I never meant for it to go this far!"
while holding it
I want you so bad
I cant even explain it
my blood tainted blade tells all
how much I want you..
and all my anguish...
as I look at you and her in a picture
I start to cry
I cant stand the fact that your not mine...
the only thing I can call mine is my blood tainted blade




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Re: my blood tainted blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Lashing_Tongue on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:31:58 AM AEST
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Hmm...my advice to both you and your friend would be this....there's absolutely no point whatsoever to being with anyone if you really want to be with someone else...you'll just create and perpetuate two more empty relationships that, empty as they are, still cause a lot of pain when they come crashing down...


Re: my blood tainted blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 11:51:51 AM AEST
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Well written deeply felt, all good things in time

(((((SAT))))))


Ben


Re: my blood tainted blade (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:42:45 PM AEST
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Awww, I hate it when people say they will never do something badd over a guy, I was in the same position...erm kinda lol but great write!

xxxKimxxx


Re: my blood tainted blade (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:42:49 PM AEST
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Awww, I hate it when people say they will never do something badd over a guy, I was in the same position...erm kinda lol but great write!

xxxKimxxx


Re: my blood tainted blade (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:42:50 PM AEST
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Awww, I hate it when people say they will never do something badd over a guy, I was in the same position...erm kinda lol but great write!

xxxKimxxx




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