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Array ( [sid] => 108723 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Forgive me [time] => 2005-10-29 21:03:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If i die today, will all ur meories of me go away.

Where would u b when u hear, will it b one of ur fears.

R will it b just another day of ur past,wondering in ur mind y i left so fast.

I love my family and friends it no lie, I am just tired of the tears in my eyes.

I look to the mirror and lookin back at me, Its not wat i want 2 c.

I want 2 go back 2 a time when i was happy not sad, tat was b4 i knew my daddy was really my stepdad.

I am in so much pain i cant feel, i dk how 2 deal.

There is a knife on the side of me, it and my rist is all i can c.

I no tat u cant c it now but it is the best, just think of it as a test.

Ill b happy again ill b w/ her and him, i can begin 2 c my life startin 2 dim.

Now its time 4 me 2 say goodbye, please dont cry.

I no ur tears wont b real, so just put me in the coffin and in the ground 4 the final seal..

I wont ever 4 get n-e 1, just do 1 thing, PLEASE FORGIVE ME 4 wat i have done...
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Please Forgive me

Contributed by pig_pen2007 on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:03:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

If i die today, will all ur meories of me go away.

Where would u b when u hear, will it b one of ur fears.

R will it b just another day of ur past,wondering in ur mind y i left so fast.

I love my family and friends it no lie, I am just tired of the tears in my eyes.

I look to the mirror and lookin back at me, Its not wat i want 2 c.

I want 2 go back 2 a time when i was happy not sad, tat was b4 i knew my daddy was really my stepdad.

I am in so much pain i cant feel, i dk how 2 deal.

There is a knife on the side of me, it and my rist is all i can c.

I no tat u cant c it now but it is the best, just think of it as a test.

Ill b happy again ill b w/ her and him, i can begin 2 c my life startin 2 dim.

Now its time 4 me 2 say goodbye, please dont cry.

I no ur tears wont b real, so just put me in the coffin and in the ground 4 the final seal..

I wont ever 4 get n-e 1, just do 1 thing, PLEASE FORGIVE ME 4 wat i have done...

Copyright © pig_pen2007 ... [ 2005-10-29 21:03:49]
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Re: Please Forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:09:35 PM AEST
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I just couldn't get through this man...where are all your words? It's like written in friggen code. c = see, man. Maybe this is just your style and I should shut-up. Peace to you

Re: Please Forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:59:07 PM AEST
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well ,unlike someone, i like this a lot. i have lived in orphanages so i know how you feel. and the code as someone calls it, keeps it modern. i can really relate. thanks for posting this.

Re: Please Forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by needs_change on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 05:04:56 PM AEST
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i love you shi shi
this is one of my favorite poems that u have written. guess what. u r sittin behind me. hahahaha. hey i bet i get it posted this time

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