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Array ( [sid] => 10870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Admist thee Garden [time] => 2003-01-21 11:20:00 [hometext] => Dallas, please share this with your street kids, it just may open their eyes ..... [bodytext] => Field of night, admist thee garden,
hence the flower of thy youth, worn veil,
is never for a moment dried,
fierce and vile, her path lies .....

Field admist the night of garden,
vanish every foe and stranger,
hence the flower of her youth,
free her path of every danger,

Robber, be then, of ruthless heart,
in which his secret, dare she come,
lingures through thee childs path,
to lurk her soul with his smooth tongue,

Field of night admist thee garden,
into his wrath, dare not she lie,
chase him, Lord, away from thee,
submerge him to thee lowest tide,

Field admist the night of garden,
I know not where, her soul has wandered,
upon this crossing, does she lay,
admist thy field, amongst ..... by day,

The fate of she, least not be cruel,
less to thy slayers drug,
but on thy street, thou lay another,
a pool made of blood,

Hence the flower, of thy youths worn veil,
a single rose, I place,
is never for a moment dried,
thy robber, thought ..... her waste!

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 46 [informant] => Valerie_Pearson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => didactic )
Admist thee Garden

Contributed by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: didactic



Field of night, admist thee garden,
hence the flower of thy youth, worn veil,
is never for a moment dried,
fierce and vile, her path lies .....

Field admist the night of garden,
vanish every foe and stranger,
hence the flower of her youth,
free her path of every danger,

Robber, be then, of ruthless heart,
in which his secret, dare she come,
lingures through thee childs path,
to lurk her soul with his smooth tongue,

Field of night admist thee garden,
into his wrath, dare not she lie,
chase him, Lord, away from thee,
submerge him to thee lowest tide,

Field admist the night of garden,
I know not where, her soul has wandered,
upon this crossing, does she lay,
admist thy field, amongst ..... by day,

The fate of she, least not be cruel,
less to thy slayers drug,
but on thy street, thou lay another,
a pool made of blood,

Hence the flower, of thy youths worn veil,
a single rose, I place,
is never for a moment dried,
thy robber, thought ..... her waste!





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Re: Admist thee Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:22:15 AM AEST
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sorry, the word admist should be spelled "amidst" must of been the keyboard


Re: Admist thee Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 12:47:02 PM AEST
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beautiful


Re: Admist thee Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 05:15:17 PM AEST
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VAL,THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY DONE,TRULY FROM THE HEART! CHRISTINA


Re: Admist thee Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:02:34 PM AEST
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Lovely..


Re: Admist thee Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Mad-Mancunian on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:49:10 AM AEST
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Wow. Just amazing.
Does it have something to do with street violence?


Re: Admist thee Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:07:18 AM AEST
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you have a great talent with words!




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