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Array ( [sid] => 1087 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Tweetie Pie [time] => 2002-07-25 06:15:48 [hometext] => Ah, yes! This was when it was all hunky-dory!
Why do our so-called friends have to make a judgement on 'how long it will last'?
Talk about the kiss of death! [bodytext] => We see each other every day
Then at weekends too
I wish that I could openly express
Just how I feel for you.

I’ve written you this rhyming verse
I thought of in the shower
To show you that you have me
Completely in your power.

You’re beautiful, you're clever
And so funny with your witties
But I have to say I’m mesmerised
By your perfect bum and t***ies.
(Sorry!!)

I think about you all the time
Each and every second
And I know that we'll last longer
Than that silly Robin reckoned.

How I missed to hear you laugh
And to see your lovely smile
Even though you were only gone
For just a little while.
(Seemed like a lifetime!!)

I guess that with this poem
I’m just trying to say
That I long for you to kiss me
And cuddle me each day.

I hope and pray
You feel this too
Because Tweetie Pie
I LOVE YOU!! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

My Tweetie Pie

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 06:15:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

We see each other every day
Then at weekends too
I wish that I could openly express
Just how I feel for you.

I’ve written you this rhyming verse
I thought of in the shower
To show you that you have me
Completely in your power.

You’re beautiful, you're clever
And so funny with your witties
But I have to say I’m mesmerised
By your perfect bum and t***ies.
(Sorry!!)

I think about you all the time
Each and every second
And I know that we'll last longer
Than that silly Robin reckoned.

How I missed to hear you laugh
And to see your lovely smile
Even though you were only gone
For just a little while.
(Seemed like a lifetime!!)

I guess that with this poem
I’m just trying to say
That I long for you to kiss me
And cuddle me each day.

I hope and pray
You feel this too
Because Tweetie Pie
I LOVE YOU!!

Copyright Â© Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2002-07-25 06:15:48]
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Re: My Tweetie Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by jewelry726 on Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 08:50:20 AM AEST
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how cute, I hope the love last!

Re: My Tweetie Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 12:13:13 AM AEST
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Hi Jewel, Alas only on my part! But I'm pleased you liked this. She has bright wide eyes and a cute little beak, just like Tweetie!
With love
Dean

Re: My Tweetie Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 11:55:35 AM AEST
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Dean, this poem is so sweet. I wish that my boyfriends would write stuff like this for me.
ShadowsCloud

Re: My Tweetie Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:16:40 AM AEST
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Hey Candice,
How many boyfriends do you have? Only kiddin!!;-))
They should, but you mustn't think any less of them if they don't, maybe they find it hard to write down the words for how I'm sure they feel for you inside!
And this kind of attempted love making didn't get me anywhere with the one I want (or wanted! I'm not sure about that still?), so I dunno!!
Thankyou very much indeed, again. I am pleased that you liked.

With love
Dean:-)

Re: My Tweetie Pie (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:06:52 AM AEST
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Dean,I have only had three boyfriends, well four if you count the one when I was five years old, but that was a very innocent relationship. That is that bad for a girl who is 20 years old, almost 21. I don't think any less of them, it's not like I've never gotten a poem from a guy. I have gotten a few, just never one this intense.
ShadowsCloud

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