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Array ( [sid] => 108676 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Maze [time] => 2005-10-29 00:17:12 [hometext] => Well, haven't written in a while. Kinda just saying im back n whats been going on. Hope ya like it. :-) [bodytext] => i've run into a maze
Not remembering which way i've entered
Nor knowing how to get out
My mind races as i pace the walls
Looking for an exit, some type of escape
The paths i've tread are worn with footprints
Of those who led before me
And as i wander aimlessly through this maze
I come across the souls
Of those who never made it out
Their spirits fly beside me
Trying to guide me as i flee
From the horrific memories
Painted on the walls
There's one place i havn't tried
One place that i have yet to go
And as i reach toward that lighted exit sign
A wall rises up before me
I fall upon my knees
And look toward the spirits for guidance
They flee back into the maze
i'm left alone, to face my fears
The darkness and unknown
I'm left alone, once again
Determined to finish this maze whole [comments] => 4 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Ineedanap [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

The Maze

Contributed by Ineedanap on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 12:17:12 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

i've run into a maze
Not remembering which way i've entered
Nor knowing how to get out
My mind races as i pace the walls
Looking for an exit, some type of escape
The paths i've tread are worn with footprints
Of those who led before me
And as i wander aimlessly through this maze
I come across the souls
Of those who never made it out
Their spirits fly beside me
Trying to guide me as i flee
From the horrific memories
Painted on the walls
There's one place i havn't tried
One place that i have yet to go
And as i reach toward that lighted exit sign
A wall rises up before me
I fall upon my knees
And look toward the spirits for guidance
They flee back into the maze
i'm left alone, to face my fears
The darkness and unknown
I'm left alone, once again
Determined to finish this maze whole

Copyright © Ineedanap ... [ 2005-10-29 00:17:12]
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Re: The Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 02:14:19 AM AEST
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It nice like it.... mylady

Re: The Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 02:52:50 PM AEST
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I like the descriptions. I think that if I tried hard enough, I could imagine the scene around me. Well done!

Re: The Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by EsotericWsdm4 on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 10:42:59 PM AEST
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AWESOME! Keep in mind that just as soon as you find your way out of this maze you will walk right into the next...

Re: The Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 05:00:12 PM AEST
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well i liked this alot i guess that lil bit of time jump stared your brain to come up with this lil poem kool i liked it

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