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As barefoot I walk
The connection is complete
The earth and I are one

How gently the dark caresses
The wind blows softly round
Crickets sing a tender song
The night and I are one

I take a deep breath
Of moist musky air
An owl flies overhead
The sky and I are one

I raise my hands to the stars
That sparkle high above
Slowly I turn to the four winds
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One Moment

Contributed by NoSaint on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 08:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

My feet caress the ground
As barefoot I walk
The connection is complete
The earth and I are one

How gently the dark caresses
The wind blows softly round
Crickets sing a tender song
The night and I are one

I take a deep breath
Of moist musky air
An owl flies overhead
The sky and I are one

I raise my hands to the stars
That sparkle high above
Slowly I turn to the four winds
The universe and I are one

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2005-10-28 20:56:22]
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Re: One Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 09:01:06 PM AEST
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amazing amazing amazing

It's short and yet stll very sweet
I love it - awesome write

- Beth -

Re: One Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 09:35:24 PM AEST
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Wow *is speechless* this is simply breath taking... it's beautiful! *smiles*

I'm surprised I haven't come across your poems before, this was great :)

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: One Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Rasputin_the_Second on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 11:29:38 PM AEST
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Amazing!

I really enjoyed the simplicity and depth of the detail. An excellent write, thanks.

Re: One Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 11:57:44 PM AEST
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Dear Shari, this poem is interesting, and also so completel You have accomplished what your poem is all about. You've made you and reader one!
Wonderful.........must write it again, so smooth, and so easy to understand!
Thank you for that lovely poem.
Warm love
consue

Re: One Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:54:51 AM AEST
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truly amazing, I say.

Re: One Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 02:05:35 PM AEST
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bravo bravo you are connected to the universe this poem flows right from your soul my sweet friend. The clock is ticking so close to us meeting!! YIPPY!
hugs
Michelle

Re: One Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by crow6279 on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:54:26 AM AEST
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Very very nice write IMHO.

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