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A picture with a twist

I'll paint ít with a razor blade

I'll paint it on my wrist

A'nd when i paint my picture

A fountain will appear

And down that flowing river

My pain will dissappear [comments] => 5 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 36 [informant] => jilted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Picture With A Twist

Contributed by jilted on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:21:20 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Im going to paint a picture

A picture with a twist

I'll paint ít with a razor blade

I'll paint it on my wrist

A'nd when i paint my picture

A fountain will appear

And down that flowing river

My pain will dissappear

Copyright Â© jilted ... [ 2005-10-28 01:21:20]
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Re: Picture With A Twist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:03:56 AM AEST
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good write!

Re: Picture With A Twist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 06:15:57 AM AEST
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Forget it. So many other people have 'shared' this with us already, its beginning to get rather ridiculous.

http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=76669
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=25296
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=75188
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=78744
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=53398
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=12534
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=78891

At least you were honest about this submission, whereas the others listed here (i'm sure there are hundreds more on the site search ~ those are only the first page's results), but I reckon enough people have had their all the pictures they'd ever want twisting out of this plagiarised-to-hell poem.

Try creating something of your own. That's what you signed up for, isn't it?

N_F

Re: Picture With A Twist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 06:19:20 AM AEST
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**whereas the others listed here weren't.

Re: Picture With A Twist (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:07:52 PM AEST
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oooh that is awesome. i love how its short but its so... whats the word... GOOD! lol i really like the flow of this... how it rhymes and goes so smoothly.

awesomeness...
hUgZ...---> jennie*

Re: Picture With A Twist (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:08:26 PM AEST
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i like your poem but ive heard it many times before...dont afraid to be original
vl

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