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Like the rushing water in a raging river
Extravagant bursts of love
Explode from my heart
Insecure and timid
A scared rabbit cowering in its hole
Brave and forthcoming
A lion roaring to its pride
Effort for triumph
A winner in this game
Holding on to hope
Striving for approval
Beat by beat
My heart pounds like a drum
Blissful and content
My soul is alive
Affectionate and committed
I relinquish my heart
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Feelings of love

Contributed by GurlyTye on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:07:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Thoughts of you flow through my mind
Like the rushing water in a raging river
Extravagant bursts of love
Explode from my heart
Insecure and timid
A scared rabbit cowering in its hole
Brave and forthcoming
A lion roaring to its pride
Effort for triumph
A winner in this game
Holding on to hope
Striving for approval
Beat by beat
My heart pounds like a drum
Blissful and content
My soul is alive
Affectionate and committed
I relinquish my heart

Copyright Â© GurlyTye ... [ 2005-10-27 12:07:39]
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Re: Feelings of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:15:05 PM AEST
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All the positive things... This is full of what I can only call "purity" in a poem - impressionistic and something of the quality of an old-time valentine. A rarity in the love poems of today. It flows very well too. Kudos!
Blessings, J.

Re: Feelings of love (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:18:07 PM AEST
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Yeah, I agree with what Julie said.

This made me smile, many could relate to this in one way, or another.
I think your writing is getting a lot better as you go along.

Well done

Great write.
*hugs*
Phil xxx

Re: Feelings of love (User Rating: 1 )
by steven_fenton1982 on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 03:24:49 PM AEST
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some interesting words.

Re: Feelings of love (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 06:30:34 PM AEST
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A heartfelt spill, and full of loving thoughts and feelings. I really like the ending. I hope it all works out for you.

Scorp.

Re: Feelings of love (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 04:53:48 PM AEST
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Good write Tye and yes its true that the trials of love can be so complicated, But they do prove that your love is strong. In the army I see that way to much through all the separation we have. I only have two months left over here and then I’ll be home with her. This write has a real visual effect on the reader and really draws you in through the comparisons you made. Very well done and a much enjoyed read my friend. Take care and keep up the writes….Steve

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