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Array ( [sid] => 108557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life, Love And Regret [time] => 2005-10-27 02:32:56 [hometext] => the metallic goddes pressed deep into flesh, scarlet overflow, gasp, hold my breath. this is for life love and regret~weepingprophet [bodytext] => crisp, tingle
scalp alive with
.....laughter?
shallow eyes turned down

to life, love and regret

the metallic goddes
pressed deep into flesh
scarlet overflow
gasp, hold my breath
this is for

life, love and regret

open mouthed awe
cold, quiver
inhale
bursting

with life, love and regret

clatter, grip
hold the skin together
hide the blade
the all knowing eye

of life, love and regret

quick.
arm under water
wrist bathed in
life, love and regret

numb.
hollow, let go
good-bye
ife, and love

the regret is
the burn never ceases
the pain forever increases
without love
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Life, Love And Regret

Contributed by weepingprophet on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:32:56 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

crisp, tingle
scalp alive with
.....laughter?
shallow eyes turned down

to life, love and regret

the metallic goddes
pressed deep into flesh
scarlet overflow
gasp, hold my breath
this is for

life, love and regret

open mouthed awe
cold, quiver
inhale
bursting

with life, love and regret

clatter, grip
hold the skin together
hide the blade
the all knowing eye

of life, love and regret

quick.
arm under water
wrist bathed in
life, love and regret

numb.
hollow, let go
good-bye
ife, and love

the regret is
the burn never ceases
the pain forever increases
without love
life....is my regret

Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-10-27 02:32:56]
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Re: Life, Love And Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:52:57 AM AEST
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wow...

Re: Life, Love And Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 05:39:19 AM AEST
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incredible.. well done

Re: Life, Love And Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:30:05 AM AEST
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Ohh I should be reading more of your work. You have the smooth flow with your words, it makes the person think of what your trying to convey.

This was brilliant, thanks for sharing it.

Jane~

Re: Life, Love And Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:38:47 AM AEST
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I like the poem
It has really nice flow
Really powerful, and emotional
Good Write

~Dawn

Re: Life, Love And Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:01:23 PM AEST
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Amazing! Another great piece.. it's oustanding how
you give a single word it's tremendous weight.

clatter, grip
hold the skin together
hide the blade
the all knowing eye

of life, love and regret

Graphic and suspenseful to the utmost.
keep up the excellent writing.. i'm a fan always.

dw

Re: Life, Love And Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:23:18 PM AEST
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so greatly expressed.. i can almost feel the stinging relief in your poem.

Re: Life, Love And Regret (User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:02:48 PM AEST
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the only word i can think of for this is: beautiful.
simply beautiful

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