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Array ( [sid] => 108543 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I thought [time] => 2005-10-26 22:27:41 [hometext] => I wrote this just writing [bodytext] => Here I am with my tears in my eyes
Crying because of all the stupid lies I believen for so long
I thought I was strong but you proved me so wrong when you decided
you didn't feel the way you use too , I loved you , I love you still ,but you know longer feel the way I feel
I tried to ask why but all I got was a "Good-bye" and Have a nice life, I walk around trying to believe im gonna be okay but it has only been one day it was I say but the truth is I dont know if I will ever be the same , the pain cuts me like a knife to the heart when I think about us being apart it breaks my heart all over again , I walk in to a state where I don't wanna be , when i keep being reminded over and over you know longer Love me like the way I love you , I lost myself in this state of mind of believeing that you will call to tell me your sorry and you want to try again but I know we won't be together , that forever doesn't last , that forever isn't real , I try to tell myself its okay its not big deal it wasn't ment to be but when i close my eyes all i see is you and me , I watch myself fall apart with my broken heart that you created and I can't stop crying everytime I think about the love we had , How the hell did you make me feel so damn sad is what I keep asking over and over in my head , Its been awhile now least I think it is my nights seem longer my days much sadder my evenings no longer exsist my life has been you and I don't know what to do
I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME AS MUCH AS I LOVED YOU
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I thought

Contributed by farraheash on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 10:27:41 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Here I am with my tears in my eyes
Crying because of all the stupid lies I believen for so long
I thought I was strong but you proved me so wrong when you decided
you didn't feel the way you use too , I loved you , I love you still ,but you know longer feel the way I feel
I tried to ask why but all I got was a "Good-bye" and Have a nice life, I walk around trying to believe im gonna be okay but it has only been one day it was I say but the truth is I dont know if I will ever be the same , the pain cuts me like a knife to the heart when I think about us being apart it breaks my heart all over again , I walk in to a state where I don't wanna be , when i keep being reminded over and over you know longer Love me like the way I love you , I lost myself in this state of mind of believeing that you will call to tell me your sorry and you want to try again but I know we won't be together , that forever doesn't last , that forever isn't real , I try to tell myself its okay its not big deal it wasn't ment to be but when i close my eyes all i see is you and me , I watch myself fall apart with my broken heart that you created and I can't stop crying everytime I think about the love we had , How the hell did you make me feel so damn sad is what I keep asking over and over in my head , Its been awhile now least I think it is my nights seem longer my days much sadder my evenings no longer exsist my life has been you and I don't know what to do
I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME AS MUCH AS I LOVED YOU




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Re: I thought (User Rating: 1 )
by strawberryshortcake on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 06:58:45 PM AEST
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whoa!!!!!!!!!unbelievable power in this write. you really were put through torrential horror by some idiot who didn't know a good thing




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