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Array ( [sid] => 108498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Introspective Mind [time] => 2005-10-26 12:22:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Life is a struggle,
Who are you to tell me otherwise?
Angry at life that you let it go by,
Your body is innocent around your mind,
Suffering yet you could change that…
Squeezing to get a chance,
Stealing to make ends meet,
Everyday struggle suffocates your mind,
Yet you beg for my help.
Who is to say where you will end up?
Who is to say what you will do next?
Tired sick of the corruption around you,
Today your way will change,
Tomorrow come, your mind is still screwed up,
I cannot help you this time I swear,
Why don’t you end your life like you say?
Will see if that will pay for the wrong you done.
For all the things I have done to change your life.
Who is to say what will become of you?
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Introspective Mind

Contributed by ruthie1983 on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 12:22:41 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Life is a struggle,
Who are you to tell me otherwise?
Angry at life that you let it go by,
Your body is innocent around your mind,
Suffering yet you could change that…
Squeezing to get a chance,
Stealing to make ends meet,
Everyday struggle suffocates your mind,
Yet you beg for my help.
Who is to say where you will end up?
Who is to say what you will do next?
Tired sick of the corruption around you,
Today your way will change,
Tomorrow come, your mind is still screwed up,
I cannot help you this time I swear,
Why don’t you end your life like you say?
Will see if that will pay for the wrong you done.
For all the things I have done to change your life.
Who is to say what will become of you?

Copyright Â© ruthie1983 ... [ 2005-10-26 12:22:41]
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Re: Introspective Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:45:13 PM AEST
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Very sad, and painful.. and a bit angry. I could feel it all.

Re: Introspective Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Nickibabe421 on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 03:45:48 PM AEST
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WOW very powerful! great job

Nicki

Re: Introspective Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 04:47:31 PM AEST
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lots of hate in this loved it so much dark feeling kool write

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