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Array ( [sid] => 108494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ALONE [time] => 2005-10-26 09:19:39 [hometext] => JUst looking for imput [bodytext] => ALONE
Trying to live trying to do whats right.
Fighting back tears alone in the night.
Afarid to be with people yet afarid to be alone.
Looking for a place one of my own.

I''m tired of failing of falling apart.
Looking for ways to open my heart.
I know i will be fine if i stay strong.
Prove to the world about me they are wrong.
Wrong about me cause im better than that.
better than wehre i have been and where iam at.
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ALONE

Contributed by SHAY_shay24 on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:19:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

ALONE
Trying to live trying to do whats right.
Fighting back tears alone in the night.
Afarid to be with people yet afarid to be alone.
Looking for a place one of my own.

I''m tired of failing of falling apart.
Looking for ways to open my heart.
I know i will be fine if i stay strong.
Prove to the world about me they are wrong.
Wrong about me cause im better than that.
better than wehre i have been and where iam at.

Copyright © SHAY_shay24 ... [ 2005-10-26 09:19:39]
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Re: ALONE (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:26:28 PM AEST
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the spelling kinda falls apart at the end, but i'm still impressed. the rhyming here is so natural, so real... i can't do that. ever. i'm so jealous!! (:

Re: ALONE (User Rating: 1 )
by xanix on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:07:41 PM AEST
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I liked it lot but it might want to be a little more colorfule

Re: ALONE (User Rating: 1 )
by Moe on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:19:59 PM AEST
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Not bad hon, short and see a lot of room for more, but good as is.

Re: ALONE (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 04:52:13 PM AEST
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i know how you fell i dont want to get hurt yet still want that someone to hold me
perfectly spoken

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