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Array ( [sid] => 108465 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide [time] => 2005-10-25 21:48:23 [hometext] => Not too graphic but i wrote this in a very large swell of emotion [bodytext] => I killed my soul
With Panadol
This empty shell that people see
They try and read depth into me

I知 not happy
I知 not angry
I have been numb
By the slice of my knife

Trying to escape
Happy neon lights
Trying to become what god intended me
An angel in their sky?
Or a devil deep beneath

Rope burn of my neck
My life will not be choked
Left empty by survival
Fulfil me with death

If destiny was easy
I would have died at birth
I suffer to be worthy
I知 over humanities joke

Trying to escape
Flashing traffic lights
Trying to join the powers that be
In heavenly home
Or devilish matrimony

Slicing at my flesh
Cutting to the bone
Taking all my breath
Breathing as I choke
Falling from the light
To far from the dark
Hark thy heavens angels sing sorrow
As the devil scratches my surface

This is my suicide song

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 298 [topic] => 72 [informant] => Sinfullilmissmuppet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
Suicide

Contributed by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:48:23 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



I killed my soul
With Panadol
This empty shell that people see
They try and read depth into me

I知 not happy
I知 not angry
I have been numb
By the slice of my knife

Trying to escape
Happy neon lights
Trying to become what god intended me
An angel in their sky?
Or a devil deep beneath

Rope burn of my neck
My life will not be choked
Left empty by survival
Fulfil me with death

If destiny was easy
I would have died at birth
I suffer to be worthy
I知 over humanities joke

Trying to escape
Flashing traffic lights
Trying to join the powers that be
In heavenly home
Or devilish matrimony

Slicing at my flesh
Cutting to the bone
Taking all my breath
Breathing as I choke
Falling from the light
To far from the dark
Hark thy heavens angels sing sorrow
As the devil scratches my surface

This is my suicide song





Copyright ツゥ Sinfullilmissmuppet ... [ 2005-10-25 21:48:23]
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Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by fake_emptyness on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:00:12 PM AEST
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indeed one would have to agree, i'm sorry for all the pain your going through. i wish i had words which could help you, i truely do. but i really enjoyed my self in this read. i can relate! i dont know that you were looking for that, but i can.


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 05:04:41 PM AEST
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wow this is how i felf in my past experences
this has alot of dinamics in it
you should go read my suicide poem i wrote when i first joined tell me wat you think
loved ur poem


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:17:51 PM AEST
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i am suprised at how much i could relate. thank you for writing.


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 02:37:54 PM AEST
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Nice write,Please check out some of my poems!


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:42:14 AM AEST
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interesting i have felt what this poem is saying before nice write keep it up

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