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Array ( [sid] => 108459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Way They Fall [time] => 2005-10-25 20:14:39 [hometext] => <3 Ryan Bursey <3 [bodytext] => The way a tear falls in a broken heart
it makes pain when it hits the bottom
and reminds us that the past is real
and that our memories can not be bought

reaching down deap to ease the pain
when i hear your name i want to cry
knowing you love her o so much
what happens if she hurts you now

she left you once why not again
she doesn't care about who you are
she likes being with you all the time
that doesnt mean she loves you back

breathe in breathe out believe
they've been there since day one
look around you everything is here
don't let it all fade away again

look further than what you see
dont look into my eyes
you shouldnt care if they're blue
just take time to look inside

i care about you o so much
to the point that i would die
to have the pleasure of your life
be saved by my love just once

Then you could see my pain
and feel my tears falling
inside my broken heart
and understand the way they fall. <3 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Way They Fall

Contributed by SAT on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:14:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



The way a tear falls in a broken heart
it makes pain when it hits the bottom
and reminds us that the past is real
and that our memories can not be bought

reaching down deap to ease the pain
when i hear your name i want to cry
knowing you love her o so much
what happens if she hurts you now

she left you once why not again
she doesn't care about who you are
she likes being with you all the time
that doesnt mean she loves you back

breathe in breathe out believe
they've been there since day one
look around you everything is here
don't let it all fade away again

look further than what you see
dont look into my eyes
you shouldnt care if they're blue
just take time to look inside

i care about you o so much
to the point that i would die
to have the pleasure of your life
be saved by my love just once

Then you could see my pain
and feel my tears falling
inside my broken heart
and understand the way they fall. <3




Copyright © SAT ... [ 2005-10-25 20:14:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Way They Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:29:23 PM AEST
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Wow, so heartfelt, almost soft like. Makes you think about things, about how people love one another, and just how much that actually means. Amazing write. I loved it.

-Cassy


Re: The Way They Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:54:24 PM AEST
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Gorgeously sad
i think i jus made up a word anywho lol
Thanx for submitting it!!!
till next time
emz


Re: The Way They Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 11:43:09 AM AEST
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beautiful.




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