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Array ( [sid] => 108453 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => choice to make [time] => 2005-10-25 18:19:16 [hometext] => they say you can love 2 persons at the same time, is it really possible? [bodytext] => how does a girl
choose the life she wants?
how does one choose
whom to love?

how will i know
the right path to take
that will lead me
to true happiness?

am i supposed to stay
with the one whom i promised
my love, my life, my future.

or take a chance to love anew
with someone whom i care for
& might someday fall in love with.

do i choose to be a wife
to a person who loves me
or be a mistress
to someone i love? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jheng [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

choice to make

Contributed by jheng on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 06:19:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

how does a girl
choose the life she wants?
how does one choose
whom to love?

how will i know
the right path to take
that will lead me
to true happiness?

am i supposed to stay
with the one whom i promised
my love, my life, my future.

or take a chance to love anew
with someone whom i care for
& might someday fall in love with.

do i choose to be a wife
to a person who loves me
or be a mistress
to someone i love?

Copyright © jheng ... [ 2005-10-25 18:19:16]
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Re: choice to make (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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oh oh, lights are on if you have to ask that question. Go for the one who loves you, the someone you love will fade...eyes... look around, ears.... hear, and then listen to what you hear....

the news, the neighbors, the poems, the radio, all tell stories... of fantasies, of fun, until their hearts begin to die...its ok to write this, I write a lot of fiction, so I understand, yet do I... or do you...

Never the less...the best thing to do is, hear your heart, then, silently listen to it, it get really loud when the wrong choice is made...now, go forth, trust....you know the true answer, your heart will guide you, yes, it will...

God does provide, if you have someone who loves you, please, love back, do not be used for a small amount of time, which you feel brings joy, go read my fictious poem, the withering flowers, make up your own mind...I write these examples to help out, I am guided by the Lord, my heart speaks crazily at times in order to make sense of life, and then, help me to make sense.. of, for and in life, thank you for this write... someone will see this, this write is painful, yet full of wisdom... smart cookie writer...

Raquel Leah :D

Re: choice to make (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 07:53:42 PM AEST
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go for the one you love the most and the one who would be willing to die for you...good write

Re: choice to make (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:34:21 PM AEST
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I definitly think it's possible to love two people, I can't quite say if I've ever loved, I know I've had extremely strong feelings about people, two people at the moment actually. But I don't know, I think, if you love someone, you would only want to be with them. It's hard, because you can love someone, and then have them not love you back, then you can have someone love you, and you not love them back. I'm not exactly sure, I'm sure it is possible, but if you grow to love another, wouldn't your love for the first person fade ? lol sorry if I got you more confused, I tried, good luck, and amazing write.

-Cassy

Re: choice to make (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:17:50 PM AEST
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It isn't possible.

Re: choice to make (User Rating: 1 )
by matlock82 on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:24:35 AM AEST
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If promises must be broken. Please be forthwright and honest with both. I've been on the receiving end and it hurts. It always stings, but the longer you wait to express your feelings or lack thereof to someone, It will crush them.

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