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i wouldnt come back
if i could fly away
i would forget everything they said i lack
if i could fly away
i could forget the past
if i could fly away
my pain would disappear with day
if i could fly away
id touch the sky
take one last look
and say goodbye [comments] => 4 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 14 [informant] => mjh0813 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

if i could fly away

Contributed by mjh0813 on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:07:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

if i could fly away
i wouldnt come back
if i could fly away
i would forget everything they said i lack
if i could fly away
i could forget the past
if i could fly away
my pain would disappear with day
if i could fly away
id touch the sky
take one last look
and say goodbye

Copyright © mjh0813 ... [ 2005-10-25 09:07:03]
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Re: if i could fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:29:38 AM AEST
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its a good poem, and i know how u feel

Re: if i could fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:51:49 AM AEST
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don't fly away, stay happy

Re: if i could fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:24:07 AM AEST
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oh yes, lets fly, fly away into the blue:> lets fly above the above, the you with you:> then fly some more, above the door that breaks the flying horror of doors:>

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I will not wake up, if you promise me you won't wake up, until we both meet the dream promised:>

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Re: if i could fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:36:18 PM AEST
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...nice little lilt...wouldn't that be nice...if I could be any animal I wished, it woud be a golden eagle...

...I get weary fighting each wave that comes in...I feel like a fish instead of a bird sometimes...either a bird with gills or a fish with feathers...somethings not right!

...if I could fly, I'd already be gone!

enigma

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