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Array ( [sid] => 108390 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take That [time] => 2005-10-24 20:36:27 [hometext] => You took it away... and I'm going to get it back [bodytext] => You took my first love,
trapping him in your web of deceit
You spoke words of venom about me
and I was weak enough to retreat

You manipulated him
creating yourself as someone who is sweet
while building me up as a mean and cold witch
I am sick of being the one who you mistreat

Its simply amazes me
how you can wear two faces
One of a sweet person to all but me
in which you make special cases

But now that youve dangled it in front of me
and Ive festered inside for long enough
Im going to reclaim what is mine
Im finally going to get tough

The thought of your lips upon his
is enough to make me cringe
so this claim of revenge
I will never rescind

I wish to reclaim my happiness
so I declare a war
I want to win my heart back
and my pride will be restored

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Serendippitty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Take That

Contributed by Serendippitty on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 08:36:27 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You took my first love,
trapping him in your web of deceit
You spoke words of venom about me
and I was weak enough to retreat

You manipulated him
creating yourself as someone who is sweet
while building me up as a mean and cold witch
I am sick of being the one who you mistreat

Its simply amazes me
how you can wear two faces
One of a sweet person to all but me
in which you make special cases

But now that youve dangled it in front of me
and Ive festered inside for long enough
Im going to reclaim what is mine
Im finally going to get tough

The thought of your lips upon his
is enough to make me cringe
so this claim of revenge
I will never rescind

I wish to reclaim my happiness
so I declare a war
I want to win my heart back
and my pride will be restored

Copyright © Serendippitty ... [ 2005-10-24 20:36:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Take That (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 05:39:33 AM AEST
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Good strong write that. Determination and gaining back the power. I understood.

Whisper

Re: Take That (User Rating: 1 )
by memories_mist on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 12:08:14 PM AEST
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Very nice write!

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