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[aid] => mick
[title] => Self Portrait
[time] => 2005-10-23 15:51:23
[hometext] => You fill in the rest, I have told you everything, without overloading your mind, writes Meagan:>
[bodytext] => I see the world through my window frame,
Square, it holds a picture, my central point
Not the whole world; volume sets my eyes
My world, perceiving nature from here:>
I look closely at a far away tree, its’ shallow
A thicker, artistic one behind
The sky above shows it subtle blue tones
White clouds linger over, such grace:>
Flattering light, no shadows, marbled sky
Blue, white, patches of silver dust, natures depth
My face of love; beautiful, great
Reflecting crisp, icy-cool weather:>
Sunny day, I filter the fresh air
Glimpsing with my blurry, talented eyes
I do silly things with my mind, my heart
To bring me joy, before sundown:>
“Set me my world, I say, my air felt breeze
This, I can realize in this state of mind,
Perhaps you are my self-portrait, from the skies
Communicating, through my eyes?” :>
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"Wake me up only if it is true, otherwise, allow me to stay in my dream, says Meagan!"
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 338
[topic] => 19
[informant] => DreamPoetess
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => InspirationalPoems
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Self Portrait
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DreamPoetess
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 03:51:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I see the world through my window frame,
Square, it holds a picture, my central point
Not the whole world; volume sets my eyes
My world, perceiving nature from here:>
I look closely at a far away tree, its’ shallow
A thicker, artistic one behind
The sky above shows it subtle blue tones
White clouds linger over, such grace:>
Flattering light, no shadows, marbled sky
Blue, white, patches of silver dust, natures depth
My face of love; beautiful, great
Reflecting crisp, icy-cool weather:>
Sunny day, I filter the fresh air
Glimpsing with my blurry, talented eyes
I do silly things with my mind, my heart
To bring me joy, before sundown:>
“Set me my world, I say, my air felt breeze
This, I can realize in this state of mind,
Perhaps you are my self-portrait, from the skies
Communicating, through my eyes?” :>
________________________________________________________________________________________________
"Wake me up only if it is true, otherwise, allow me to stay in my dream, says Meagan!"
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DreamPoetess
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Re: Self Portrait
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 05:06:49 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. We must look out through very similar window frames. I see much of the very same things. The trees and sky and now that is it crisp and cool the deer amble around the property and pond for they know they are safe here. I enjoy nature so much. It is such a gift from God. I don't know why man is intent upon destroying it. Rita |
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Re: Self Portrait
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 06:05:41 PM AEST
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Meagan I do so agree with you sweet lady. Such beautiful words warms ones heart and opens ones eyes to the splendor that is in front of them. Another very well written piece of poetry from a very gifted poetess. Well done.
*hugs*
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Re: Self Portrait
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:35:32 PM AEST
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Yes, I concur with the Eternal Dreamer Meagan, this is beautifuloy written.
Nature is such a great gift from a loving Father in Heaven, and so many cannot see the glory around them.
Though all that is has a forward thrust, there is beauty in everything that moves and grows.as it unrfolds.
Thank you for sharing your beautifully penned poem with us.
HBlessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: Self Portrait
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:52:38 AM AEST
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quite beautiful indeed it all came together as
it was meant to , a most beautiful image 2 be sure . . .
Ben |
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Re: Self Portrait
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 02:36:30 PM AEST
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Some good, descriptive words that gave the reader some clear imagery. It very much has an introspective feel to it.
Nice write Meagan, keep it up : )
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Re: Self Portrait
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by DreamPoetess on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:52:37 AM AEST
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Very true, everyone has the apex mind, you cannot be in all places at the same time, you take it in from where you are, what you perceive to be truth, until you are to be called, from Him, up above, the self portrait that we are, same face created from that window box, the square:> if you notice, everything I write, is up high, not on ground level:>
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Wondering if in my dreams my dream will dream the dream of dreams:>
Megans writes:> |
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Re: Self Portrait
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:14:27 AM AEST
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well done megan....
can you hear the footsteps echoing down the hall?
and yoo hoo to you. |
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Re: Self Portrait
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by DreamPoetess on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:36:11 PM AEST
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Yes Secret Wind, I heard you, thank you for visiting my dream:>
Meagan writes quotes:>
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The next time anyone wants to find me, just go down the hall, and and I will hear your echo in my dream:> |
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Re: Self Portrait
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 07:36:41 PM AEST
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| Cool! |
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Re: Self Portrait
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 09:50:17 AM AEST
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This poem shines a soft light on your soul. The beauty within pours out through your well crafted words for all of us to experience and enjoy. Isn't it sad that many people look through their own window frames but never see through it?
Butch |
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