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Array ( [sid] => 108283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not A Pretty Sight [time] => 2005-10-23 03:31:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The three-letter word
That will end her life tonight
You don’t need to say it
She knows she’s not a pretty sight

She starved herself for weeks
She wouldn’t eat at all
She’s scared of what will happen
She’s too weak she’ll fall

All of this happened
Cause someone never cared
Someone didn’t bother
Her life could have been spared

She’s standing there naked
Looking into the mirror
She’s lost weight from not eating
But a tears

Rolling down her check
She slides down onto the floor
She lies there in silence
She looks at the mirror more

She’s still not thin enough
She hasn’t eaten for a while
She kills herself tonight
She’ll never be a pretty sight [comments] => 2 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 48 [informant] => xxSuicidalChickxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Not A Pretty Sight

Contributed by xxSuicidalChickxx on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 03:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The three-letter word
That will end her life tonight
You don’t need to say it
She knows she’s not a pretty sight

She starved herself for weeks
She wouldn’t eat at all
She’s scared of what will happen
She’s too weak she’ll fall

All of this happened
Cause someone never cared
Someone didn’t bother
Her life could have been spared

She’s standing there naked
Looking into the mirror
She’s lost weight from not eating
But a tears

Rolling down her check
She slides down onto the floor
She lies there in silence
She looks at the mirror more

She’s still not thin enough
She hasn’t eaten for a while
She kills herself tonight
She’ll never be a pretty sight

Copyright Â© xxSuicidalChickxx ... [ 2005-10-23 03:31:55]
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Re: Not A Pretty Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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awesome...heartbreaking but well written

Re: Not A Pretty Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike_BH on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:45:58 AM AEST
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this didnt just hit my heart it. hit my soul. very moving and very well thought out. the images were so well put i could see it in my head. very nice job

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