Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 11-June 11:35:27 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 108255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Candlestick [time] => 2005-10-22 18:21:34 [hometext] => Burn [bodytext] => i got a match so therefore light me up
light me up so therfore when i get into that zone
all of the problems that i had i want have to worry because i'll be stoned
stoned until i can care less
i have an addiction so therefore i 'm trying to confess
burn, burn , burn until there is nothing else to burn
read me like a book until you get tired of me so your page you can turn
slowly i know that my lights will go out
am i afraid
No
when i'm ready i'll shout
life is like a Bowling ball
it keeps rolling until every damn pin is down
why frown
so therefore i ask
light my candlestick
and watch me burn
light my candlestick until the color of it turns
light my candlestick, light my candlestick and watch me go out slowly
but boldly
light my candlestick until there is nothing of me left
light it good until i put forth into my last breath
i'm stronger then any brick
but my pain has became so much that i have to let it burn
i have to let it burn
so don't be afraid when i ask you
to get a match and light me slowly
light me up
light me up real good
light me up like you should
i'm stronger then any brick
light my candlestick



[comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => seci [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Candlestick

Contributed by seci on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:21:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



i got a match so therefore light me up
light me up so therfore when i get into that zone
all of the problems that i had i want have to worry because i'll be stoned
stoned until i can care less
i have an addiction so therefore i 'm trying to confess
burn, burn , burn until there is nothing else to burn
read me like a book until you get tired of me so your page you can turn
slowly i know that my lights will go out
am i afraid
No
when i'm ready i'll shout
life is like a Bowling ball
it keeps rolling until every damn pin is down
why frown
so therefore i ask
light my candlestick
and watch me burn
light my candlestick until the color of it turns
light my candlestick, light my candlestick and watch me go out slowly
but boldly
light my candlestick until there is nothing of me left
light it good until i put forth into my last breath
i'm stronger then any brick
but my pain has became so much that i have to let it burn
i have to let it burn
so don't be afraid when i ask you
to get a match and light me slowly
light me up
light me up real good
light me up like you should
i'm stronger then any brick
light my candlestick







Copyright © seci ... [ 2005-10-22 18:21:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Candlestick (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:59:53 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
nicely done loved how it sead let it all burn the hurt
amazing job


Re: Candlestick (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 09:31:46 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Hey,
Nice poem, i like the candlestick n i like the way you talk about letting the pain burn, most other people jus say bottle it up then swallow it n leave it to fester, burning is so absolute.
Makes me wish i could burn.
till next time,
emz




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com