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im sorry i hurt you
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i know what i was for you
i was your release
but now you have someone better
please forget about me
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dream of us but i didnt have that dream
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im sorry i hurt you!!

Contributed by crazy on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 10:15:05 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

im sorry i hurt you
i dont know what to do
to make you feel better
im sorry i hurt you
you changed everything for me
i was blessed
wit the time i spent with you
im sorry i hurt you
i understand you are drepressed
please dont lock me out
out of your life
i look happy but
inside i cry for you
im sorry i hurt you
dont go back to hiding
in the world of depression please
im so sorry i hurt you
you tryed to be my everything
to be the one i needed
i cant take back what i sead
but im sorry i hurt you
i know what i was for you
i was your release
but now you have someone better
please forget about me
dont huet anymore
i feel bad for hurting your dream
dream of us but i didnt have that dream
please dont take this poem as a negative thing
im sorry for hurting you !

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Re: im sorry i hurt you!! (User Rating: 1 )
by romance_pyro on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 01:46:26 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. I think he will be ok. Its best that way anyway.

Re: im sorry i hurt you!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 03:16:21 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem.

"I feel bad for hurting your dream
Dream of us but I didn't have that dream"

Sometimes the truth hurts but it is better to tell the truth than to continue on with a lie. Nicely done.

Re: im sorry i hurt you!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 07:23:16 PM AEST
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I'm sure they'll understand. A lot of people.. for the beginning it really hurts, because your just realizing what you lost, most people blame themselves, but eventually learn, that if you both weren't happy it never would have worked, they'll be ok, don't worry. Great write.

-Cassy

Re: im sorry i hurt you!! (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 11:49:53 PM AEST
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"A spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down, the medicine go down, the medicine go down." Wonder if it works with being dumped too?

Rita

Re: im sorry i hurt you!! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 05:41:36 PM AEST
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Crazy dear thank you so much for all your lovely comments.
This is a very real-life poem Crazy. It's not easy to tell someone good-bye without hurting them. No one likes to be rejected, but sometimes we have to whether we or they want us to.
I loved your compassion, and the fact that you could say "I'm Sorry" for hurting you
That says loads about your character. Very good
Warm love
lovingcritters
consue

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