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Array ( [sid] => 108224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gillian [time] => 2005-10-22 01:33:44 [hometext] => death...unexpected, why do our friends have to leave us so young with so much potential? how is this fair? [bodytext] => Gillian

i remember her as an aura
her spirit was enough to make anyone smile
she shone as she sat at her desk
her energy almost to much for the enclosed room of the class
the freckles on her face, so beautiful
that moped she drove, not so secure
didnt see the truck, its a coma they say, time to operate
difficulties ensue, she...she dies
no more smiles, light hearts, or laughter
it haunts...the people lost
where do we go from here
there has been too much, how much can a heart take
rest in peace love, for thats who you were
you were loved, and loved. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 523 [topic] => 38 [informant] => lanabear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )

Gillian

Contributed by lanabear on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 01:33:44 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

Gillian

i remember her as an aura
her spirit was enough to make anyone smile
she shone as she sat at her desk
her energy almost to much for the enclosed room of the class
the freckles on her face, so beautiful
that moped she drove, not so secure
didnt see the truck, its a coma they say, time to operate
difficulties ensue, she...she dies
no more smiles, light hearts, or laughter
it haunts...the people lost
where do we go from here
there has been too much, how much can a heart take
rest in peace love, for thats who you were
you were loved, and loved.

Copyright © lanabear ... [ 2005-10-22 01:33:44]
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Re: Gillian (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 01:43:35 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss but thisa is a great tribute to a beautifull person that u lost.
Some things we may never understand.
huggs, luv,
emy

Re: Gillian (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 10:03:40 PM AEST
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Nice tribute

Whisper

Re: Gillian (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 05:24:25 PM AEST
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Amazing piece of poetry & a great memorial for your friend.... Excellent poem!!

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