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Array ( [sid] => 10821 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Last Goodbye [time] => 2003-01-20 19:20:00 [hometext] => I wrote this when I boke up with my first love... [bodytext] => How can I say I´m sorry
When I know that you don´t care?
Now that I hve done you wrong
How can I say these feelings that I share?

I can not say I love you
Or that I really truly care,
´Cause my words would mean as much to you
As a layer of thin air.

How can I say good-bye
Must I face my worat fear?
Must I lose all of these feelings
That I holde so near?

How can I let go
Of a love that was so true?
How can I forget these feelings
That I still hold for you?

Why can´t I say good-bye?
Even when I was wrong
To think that these feelings
Could last forever long?

But I guess it´s really over.
I´m left alone and so sad,
Yet I still think of us
And all the times we had.

Maybe in the future
We can sort this all through,
But until then, my dearest love,
I´ll say one last "I love you." [comments] => 9 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 22 [informant] => kolbrun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Last Goodbye

Contributed by kolbrun on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

How can I say I´m sorry
When I know that you don´t care?
Now that I hve done you wrong
How can I say these feelings that I share?

I can not say I love you
Or that I really truly care,
´Cause my words would mean as much to you
As a layer of thin air.

How can I say good-bye
Must I face my worat fear?
Must I lose all of these feelings
That I holde so near?

How can I let go
Of a love that was so true?
How can I forget these feelings
That I still hold for you?

Why can´t I say good-bye?
Even when I was wrong
To think that these feelings
Could last forever long?

But I guess it´s really over.
I´m left alone and so sad,
Yet I still think of us
And all the times we had.

Maybe in the future
We can sort this all through,
But until then, my dearest love,
I´ll say one last "I love you."

Copyright Â© kolbrun ... [ 2003-01-20 19:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Devlina on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:05:30 AM AEST
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I know this one!! Well wirtten! Love can suck, but in time you get over it and life goes on.

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 02:37:47 PM AEST
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I love when peoplewrite from the heart as you have done here. True emotions seem to add scope to everything written. I was captured from the very first lines..."How can I say I´m sorry ; When I know that you don´t care?" This is something that I can relate to.

Nice write, keep up the good work.
Doug

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:04:20 PM AEST
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awwww straight from the heart...

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 08:03:28 PM AEST
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true heartfelt beauty undiminished

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:28:04 AM AEST
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I can identify with this too Lolbrun. What a lovely, heartfelt poem you have written
Chrissie

Thank you so much for your kind comments on mine

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:17:14 AM AEST
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I am very late to read this poem but I am very delighted to read this lovely write..Thank you for sharing..venkat

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:28:06 AM AEST
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waht a strong evocative peom ..loved it
the tone and emotion blend to make the reader feel the loss the hurt and the love lost ..wonderful

peace be yuor journey
terry

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:28:47 PM AEST
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kolbrun, i like this poem alot ... mostly coz i've been there... and that's the way you truely appreciate something like this, is if you've been there... keep it up!

Re: The Last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:29:34 PM AEST
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kolbrun, i like this poem alot ... mostly coz i've been there... and that's the way you truely appreciate something like this, is if you've been there... keep it up!

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