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Taking Candy from a Baby

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:20:19 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Highlighter
To mark the quote
With a spark
The wave that rocked the boat
Cite the authors note
A tale of thievery
Or so he once wrote

Easy
Like taking candy
From a baby
A purse from an old lady
As the definite
Turns into a maybe

Pumpkin pie
Sugar plum
Lucy in the sky
Her diamond, floatin’ by
I aint got none
Just this rusty old gun
Not worth a damn
Just gonna spoil the fun
In every crowd
There is always one
Who cant dance
Who wont last


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Re: Taking Candy from a Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:28:57 PM AEST
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good one it makes you think.


Re: Taking Candy from a Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:49:26 PM AEST
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Hmmm...not so sure I like the mocking tone I detect in these words...Looks like another one of your veiled writes, where you start off saying one thing, and then turn it nasty. Such a pessimist...I remember a time when many of your writes ended on a positive note.


H.S.
(Hoping those days greet you again at some point)


Re: Taking Candy from a Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 09:44:15 PM AEST
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I have a feeling there's a general message, but I'm not quite getting it. Great write, all the same. :D


Re: Taking Candy from a Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 05:58:47 AM AEST
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i like it, well done.
XoXo.




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