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Array ( [sid] => 108146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Davina [time] => 2005-10-20 17:46:28 [hometext] => Written about what would have been my little girl only I had a miscarriage.Was gonna call her Davina as you might be able 2 tell.Also been told I might never be able 2 have my own kids. [bodytext] => Death before birth.
Angel in the sky.
Very young much 2 young 2 die.
In heaven above.
Night and day.
Angel in the sky.

R.I.P Davina [comments] => 7 [counter] => 372 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Kazzy1231 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Davina

Contributed by Kazzy1231 on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:46:28 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Death before birth.
Angel in the sky.
Very young much 2 young 2 die.
In heaven above.
Night and day.
Angel in the sky.

R.I.P Davina




Copyright © Kazzy1231 ... [ 2005-10-20 17:46:28]
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Re: Davina (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:51:34 PM AEST
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I'm sure that Davina loves you. Even though she was not able to live.
You'll have your own kids someday. I know you will.
Just keep at it, Kazzy1231.
You'd definitely be a loving mother.

Your writing friend in faith as well as poetry ; )
Cupid


Re: Davina (User Rating: 1 )
by Kristone on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 06:40:31 PM AEST
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I thaught that was a very touchy poem and as my first time on this web site, I am glad that your poem was the first that I have read. It is very good.


Re: Davina (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:59:34 PM AEST
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Wow, that' was so beautiful. I'm really sorry about your baby. That shouldn't happen to such an innocent soul. I'm sorry.
-Will


Re: Davina (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:23:58 AM AEST
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A write so lovingly written for such a beautiful babe,,,
I believe someday you willl see her though she never made it in this world..
I pray that you will be a mother again...in this world as....
miracles DO happen expecially in true belief and prayer...
I am sorry from the bottom of my heart
coni take care Kazzy1231


Re: Davina (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:31:34 PM AEST
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A Beautiful Poem says it all


Re: Davina (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:14:38 AM AEST
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i love this poem
i like the repitition of angel in the sky


Re: Davina (User Rating: 1 )
by RickShaw on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 11:09:18 AM AEST
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Hi Kazzy,
Really beautiful poem. Very sad losing your baby like that.Try and be strong thanks for your nice comment on my poem




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