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Array ( [sid] => 108142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Desception of the brain [time] => 2005-10-20 17:17:13 [hometext] => You move you come back and nothing is the same, Only the feelings, the pain [bodytext] => Swelling within,
Crying within,
Nothing is what it's been
Decieving myself is a sin

How could I think eveything would be the same?
Didn't I consider that everyone would change?
I'm just going through so much pain.
I should have used my brain

I miss my best friend
I miss how it used to be
Shot to the head,
as quick as it could end
I wish i would have seen

I'm selfish to have believed,
Everyone moves on
How was I so descieved?
Now my friend is gone

Two years is a long time,
I admit I've changed too
My brain patterns not in line
I'm not a friend of mine.

Kate Ecklund [comments] => 3 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 65 [informant] => suicidal_imbecile [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Desception of the brain

Contributed by suicidal_imbecile on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Swelling within,
Crying within,
Nothing is what it's been
Decieving myself is a sin

How could I think eveything would be the same?
Didn't I consider that everyone would change?
I'm just going through so much pain.
I should have used my brain

I miss my best friend
I miss how it used to be
Shot to the head,
as quick as it could end
I wish i would have seen

I'm selfish to have believed,
Everyone moves on
How was I so descieved?
Now my friend is gone

Two years is a long time,
I admit I've changed too
My brain patterns not in line
I'm not a friend of mine.

Kate Ecklund

Copyright Â© suicidal_imbecile ... [ 2005-10-20 17:17:13]
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Re: Desception of the brain (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:13:04 AM AEST
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Great poem.. It was sad and very emotion filled. great poem...

christina

Re: Desception of the brain (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 06:08:10 PM AEST
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Good Poem-
Nothing is forever-
All things change (some for the better/some for the worse) all one can do is go onward...
Joe

Re: Desception of the brain (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 05:04:11 PM AEST
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Okay Kate what to say about this one besides
that it was yet another emotional and heart and
heart felt write. Your writes always flow so
smooth when I read them as if you were
standing here reading it to me. Its like reading
your mind as the words flow of the page before
my eyes. I hope all is well and I hope you can
enjoy life event through all the twists and turns
and all the heart ach that it throws are way. Take
care and keep up the writes and I will read when
I have the time….Steve

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