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Array ( [sid] => 108128 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => used [time] => 2005-10-20 13:15:42 [hometext] => Spell check is refusing to work :( I didnt know what to call this poem. suggestions are welcome, i called it used because i gess thats how i feel [bodytext] => I'm not your love slave
don't expect me to wait here
whilst you misbehave

I'm tired
i'm worn and i'm torn
and i can't let this fantasy take me away
so if you're going to go
go
and if you're going to stay
stay

let that be it
no more fighting
no more paranoia fit

you taught me that holding hands
meant more then cheap words
you taught me there's a whole new world of gestures
that cannot be heard

i will practice what you teach
but you don't take to heart
the words you preach

It's all so empty now
so much swimming space for niggling doubt

now that i know it was all fake
i've got to ask myself?....
was it all just a mistake? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 22 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => |||||||Incorrect spelling has been corrected, as requested. ♦Moderator_14♦||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

used

Contributed by loopylou on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 01:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'm not your love slave
don't expect me to wait here
whilst you misbehave

I'm tired
i'm worn and i'm torn
and i can't let this fantasy take me away
so if you're going to go
go
and if you're going to stay
stay

let that be it
no more fighting
no more paranoia fit

you taught me that holding hands
meant more then cheap words
you taught me there's a whole new world of gestures
that cannot be heard

i will practice what you teach
but you don't take to heart
the words you preach

It's all so empty now
so much swimming space for niggling doubt

now that i know it was all fake
i've got to ask myself?....
was it all just a mistake?

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2005-10-20 13:15:42]
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Re: used (User Rating: 1 )
by je2ica3 on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:00:25 PM AEST
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ive had that feel ive felt that way before so i hope you feel better soon trust me you will feel better soon..well nice job fixing your emotions into your poetry great write

Re: used (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 03:10:38 PM AEST
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Great poem, I was entranced, I've been through this situation. I liked
"i will practice what you teach
but you don't take to heart
the words you preach" A lot, thanks for sharing

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