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Array ( [sid] => 108125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2005-10-20 12:35:40 [hometext] => not a very good write...but i feel like i wanna post it..i didn't do a very good job on it and i hate it..but...i don't know...let me know what you guys think. [bodytext] => I told you about my painful past
I thought you would stick around
I told you how i feel inside
I thought you would dry my tears

I told you my secrets of death
I thought you were a reason for life
I told you my every passion
I thought you were someone to trust

I told you not to worry
I thought you could deal with my flaws
I told you I am trying to change
I thought i was good enough for you

I told you how you could hurt me most
I NEVER thought you would use it against me
I told you to be carefull with my glass heart
I never thought you would throw it at the wall

I told you how much i hate you
I thought you would believe my lies
I told you to get away from me
I never thought you would come back for more

How many times can one fall for this crap?
How many lives does a glass heart get?
How long before i give in again?
How long before the next time you win?? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 43 [informant] => purplestary [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
untitled

Contributed by purplestary on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I told you about my painful past
I thought you would stick around
I told you how i feel inside
I thought you would dry my tears

I told you my secrets of death
I thought you were a reason for life
I told you my every passion
I thought you were someone to trust

I told you not to worry
I thought you could deal with my flaws
I told you I am trying to change
I thought i was good enough for you

I told you how you could hurt me most
I NEVER thought you would use it against me
I told you to be carefull with my glass heart
I never thought you would throw it at the wall

I told you how much i hate you
I thought you would believe my lies
I told you to get away from me
I never thought you would come back for more

How many times can one fall for this crap?
How many lives does a glass heart get?
How long before i give in again?
How long before the next time you win??




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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:04:55 PM AEST
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How many lives does a glass heart get?

Shattered...

I was thinking of you spilling your guts, finding out, it was not necessary. Sad write, reading poetry here at YPDC lets me know a lot of us have something in common, woo hoo, makes us all pretty normal lol, feelings, wise:>

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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:13:27 PM AEST
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The thought behind this reminds me of my poem ; Diamond Dust Dreams .. it's really nice (yours) perhaps you'd read mine and see what you think?




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