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Array ( [sid] => 108124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Binding Whispers [time] => 2005-10-20 12:28:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She lost what she had found
What she always thought she'd need
A thin veneer of strength
The answer was to bleed

He found the way through
Love pierced her more
Than even her sharpest blade
Had ever reached before

Even his lightest touch
Invokes the fire pain
All of his soft whispers
Drip tears that fall like rain

A heightened, glowing pleasure
That brought her to her knees
And when his presence bound her
She was begging for release

She feels the world at last
As if a newborn life
Opened new in every way
His love, his slave, his wife. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 13 [informant] => _Raspberry_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Binding Whispers

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



She lost what she had found
What she always thought she'd need
A thin veneer of strength
The answer was to bleed

He found the way through
Love pierced her more
Than even her sharpest blade
Had ever reached before

Even his lightest touch
Invokes the fire pain
All of his soft whispers
Drip tears that fall like rain

A heightened, glowing pleasure
That brought her to her knees
And when his presence bound her
She was begging for release

She feels the world at last
As if a newborn life
Opened new in every way
His love, his slave, his wife.




Copyright © _Raspberry_ ... [ 2005-10-20 12:28:19]
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Re: Binding Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:37:34 PM AEST
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wow..this is a great write. good flow....and very interesting and a touch of sad....


Re: Binding Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 01:31:40 PM AEST
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Heart-wrenching and saddening.... but my God,
it's extremely well written. With clever rhyme and
flow you emphasized every emotion to it's utmost.

Amazing. Keep up the superb writing.


Re: Binding Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:00:46 PM AEST
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Great work..loved it

Jenni


Re: Binding Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by Emptymyth on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:18:46 PM AEST
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Wonderful


Re: Binding Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:11:15 PM AEST
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a lovely read and I love the title.




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