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You Took the Best, Take the worst instead
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:48:35 AM in AEST
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How could you do this?
How could you let him go?
How could you let him tie the rope?
How could you lose such a soul?
You took the best, you bastard
Now its time to take the worst
Time to let me tie the rope
This life won't be your first
Take my life for his
You have stopped me too many times
It's time to save us all
Protect the world from my crimes
Copyright ©
guiltycircles
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2005-10-20 02:48:35]
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Re: You Took the Best, Take the worst instead
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by Blessedangel on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 08:31:50 AM AEST
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Thats a great write, i myself was in that position, where my brothers life was taken when i knew it should have been me
keep up the good work
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Re: You Took the Best, Take the worst instead
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:04:25 AM AEST
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thats beautiful sophie
R.I.P. Rob
love you XoXo |
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Re: You Took the Best, Take the worst instead
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:41:52 PM AEST
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Very emotive, saying so much in so few words. I enjoyed this read, and can understand where your anger is coming from. Love that ending, it's strong, and it leaves an impact.
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