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Invisable.
Contributed by
xpixiexdustx
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:04:27 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Their taunts grow louder
with each breath I take.
It swallows me without a sound,
as I silently break.
I hold my mask strong
and keep my anger down.
For much is to be gained
if my hate is never found.
Their sarcastic questions
and their superior sneers
is pathetic in my eyes
and painful in my ears.
But I keep my scornful scowl
to reflect how they annoy.
And as they laugh and whisper,
I vanish in a void.
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xpixiexdustx
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2005-10-19 21:04:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Invisable.
(User Rating: 1 ) by trini on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:01:31 PM AEST (User
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hey, not bad. very nicely written. i understand what you mean. one day you'll be the superior, and they will wish they had never messed with you. keep up the good work
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Re: Invisable.
(User Rating: 1 ) by radstraightedge on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:25:10 PM AEST (User
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wow. i like this. i can really relate. you put it nicely into words. very good
-lexie |
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